this is the kind of novel I've been searching for. I love this author. ALL HAIL GOD KING PANCAKES WITCH. GREATEST AUTHOR OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like the story, the narration is very detailed, but I was very distracted while reading, because, at the end of the sentence there are no punctuation marks. And sometimes there's a double "." and
Great novel, very good, it may be a little confusing but I managed to understand some parts, it is just info dumping but it's a good novel, check it out
Yeah...the grammar is a little bad. Inconsistencies in using first person and third person are confusing. I just hope that your (author) future chapter more focus on trying to give a fighting chance to humanity, meaning developing weapon, technologies, martial art sect or magic academy not just MC trying to become strong alone. Even superman cannot be at two place at once. So built a fucking army.
it is nice novel.my friend recommended me. so I decided to read it. I started from first chapter. I hope this will be the position holder content for WSA award.
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This is an extremely high quality story with great set up, interesting world and an intriguing system that I very much look forward to seeing utilized in later installments. The book opens right in the thick of the action as the protagonist is beaten up by a group gangsters and told he owes them 50k to pay back his dead father's debt. This works well to throw the protagonist into adversity right from the start as he struggles to come up with a realistic way of obtaining the money. From there, a chance discovery leads to him entering an original system world where he can exchange an item of his own possession for something he can borrow for a limited time. It's an interesting set up and I look forward to seeing how he plans on using this ability to work back his father's debt. All the right elements are in place to make this a fantastic read. I look forward to reading more.
are chapters with 18+ stuff labeled because I want to read this but won't to avoid 18+ stuffbecause I find that stuff to be a bit gross sorry
Thanks for the novel.I will going to read it after chapters stock more than 50 to 60 , Thanks for the novel.I will going to read it after chapters stock more than 50 to 60 , Thanks for the novel.I will going to read it after chapters stock more than 50 to 60 ,
I dont know if the story ever gets better but I read a few chapters and just couldn't do it. The grammar is absolutely atrocious. If an editor is ever added down the line maybe itll be good. In it's current form though it needs work.
Good novel What more do I need?
Pretty great story with a great tale behind. Highly recommended for avid readers.If any errors found don’t blame the author but rather pity.A SINGLE MAN,A GREAT FATHER OF A FAMILY