I'll write this review just because i think this novel would be good but the way this novel is written is so weird.. the novel is in 1st person all the time like mc is narrating the story.. this is not how it's supposed to be.. most parts should be in 3rd person.. only thinking and talking should be in 1st person
Excellent, dear writer, please continue the story????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Continue.
Such a great story! It's really cool to have a prehistoric setting. And whatever future knowledge the MC is bringing it isn't to OP. Lots of tension and mystery, this is definitely a story I'd like to be chosen and continue to follow.
I read this in Chinese a few months ago but never finished it Bc I lost it. :) I hope it gets selected Bc it was go yet also very weird....
Dude its so good, like i have never i mean never read a mafia type fighting nove ………. The character development was on point, i mean seeing mayr go from school kid to taking on mafia boss was exhilaratingHope the updates are frequent
si buscas Mc que no tenga opinion ni tome decisiones, actitud y personalidad demasiado promedio mas para el lado patetico , mayores que le digan que hacer y lo manejen como marioneta y el solo acepte todo al igual que las mujeres lo manejan como quieren ..esta es tu novela
Finally an actual readable novel in the weekly voting pool. The story is interesting, not cliched. It has a huge amount of potential. I hope this makes it past 40 chapters.
Great quotes and idioms, but all in the wrong places. All words no substances. Synopsis is the section where author give an insight of the story, not to show off.
Haven't read it yet but I'mma rate you five stars for that wonderful synopsis, may you have all the donations you need venerable primordial being........................................................................... ....
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
It's nice seeing such great originals from time to time.Honestly, I suck at writing these, I'm already way past my limitations. Any lo-140!