It's good to read, some characters are lovely and memorable, but for the love of God.... Author remember the colors you give to characters... MC went through three to four different eye colors, not to mention the girls. If you can't remember, create some side notes with vague details regarding their pallettes.
It's the author here Givin myself five stars!
Personally, I liked the prologue wayyy better than the actual story. [Sorry Author ?]. Also I’ll be stealing some parts of the prologue for my own story ??.Anyways, I am no one to judge as I haven’t even read the first few chapter yet. So I’ll just give it 4.5 stars
i love this book both the protagonist male and female Are awesome
Zuuuuuum!
"This Master, potion of kindness."
As they were both admiring the moon, the looked in each others eyes and felt blessed that they met during that cold winter night and how the both of them brought warmth, joy and comfort into each other life and now a new life. Just like the season, the cold winter will end and then comes spring where the flowers bloom and blossom.
And all that glitters is gold
I will trim it a bit and we can send it to boss, Zhou Xuan said.
Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play
And all that glitters is gold
You'll never shine if you don't glow