Now I know I will never ever be alone
Then he slyly slipped his arm around her waist and scooted closer until their thighs were touching.
(Oh fuck, he's-)
It seemed she noticed that I wasn't the 'normal' ben but I wasn't really worried of being noticed as just the assumption that I was someone else inside Ben's body was absurd to think of and I was currently ten which is the period of time in which most children started to change so it wouldn't be too suspicious if I seemed different to them as they could just reason that I was starting the rebellious teenager phase.
A world of pure ice. A place that was literally built on top of a flaming mountain. A place that - no a world - that was literally within a flower. A gate that opened to hell- which have 999 levels! A dungeon? Or underground cave that was literally a maze of more than 99,9999 veins or ways, full of bloodthirsty beasts, that reaches all the way to the innermost part of a world. Or a dragon so large that it makes the fire breathing dragon that set his village on fire looks like ants? Or how about a small dragonfly that's capable of cutting down a whole mountain and flipped it over twice without any effort.
She really would have been left with serious injuries from that. Was this really a friendly battle anymore?
the poor old man who did not know he was being scrutinized by one of the students he is gonna train came to the front, "Good Morning heroes, I am 'Ernst Muri' and will be introducing to you the concept of magic."
Bad translation. Extremely poor writing quality.
I am very satisfied reading, because the chapter content is long and enjoyable. Last time I watched the Greek gods, but this book is no less interesting.
The book is much better than expected. I was a little uncertain at first, but now I'm really enjoying it. Max is an interesting character and is calm and logical. I really enjoyed the logical deductions required to solve the first case, which had happened over six months in the past, and most of the evidence was gone. Unfortunately, there are some grammar and punctuation issues, but most do not detract from the story.
I would love to read your books but from how many times u have dropped the others I’m not ready to go through it again, maybe when it gets to about 300 I’ll come back
The idea for a fanfic is interesting, but the author knows neither the original novel nor the series. Example: it is the year 289.Denerys is about 7-8 years old and the author writes that in two years he will help her escape during the wedding with Drogo, while in the original,during wedding she is 13 years old in book and 17in the series, Another example is Loras Tyrell who both in the book and and in the show is gay, here he is interested in MC's sister (his summoned general) who is a woman. The author literally writes that Loras Tyrell is not angry that MC refused to join him, which wouldn't allow him to get to know his beautiful sister, which is why he is a bit angry about it. But he is not desperate because his lands are full of beautiful women(Read up to Chapter 20)