Dragon Ball: Goku Rebirth (Hiatus)

Its a nice try to copy the MC of fullmetal panik and the storyline ( even if it is a little bit different). But the story is shallow as if written by EA, and the jockes are as lame as ****ing on youre girlfriend and telling her that it is a sign of love. Its like a kid who trys to play a prank, known by you and it think its funny like hell. Just dont waste youre time, couse no on will give it back to you.

Thisbis perfect kind of laid back I wanted to read. I am more than happy to read this kind of novel. Though the chapters are bit short, the quality makes up for it.

Interesting. A novel with the MC as an NPC but with the player privileges. Also I find the game elements fun(interesting) to read.World development is good, giving the race distinction but my view on elves has changed to see, a deeper view to elves not being just archers.

one of the best novels i read so far, not only is the mc ruthless when he needs to be but also knows when to take a step back and HE ISN'T ARROGANT, can you believe that? give the novel a try, its truly truly a great work.

The book is much better than expected.  I was a little uncertain at first, but now I'm really enjoying it.  Max is an interesting character and is calm and logical.  I really enjoyed the logical deductions required to solve the first case, which had happened over six months in the past, and most of the evidence was gone.  Unfortunately, there are some grammar and punctuation issues, but most do not detract from the story.

"Goliath!"