This is a gem in the 'rent-a-friend' genre that brings a smile to your face with a clever set up and loveable characters.The general writing quality is extremely high, and personally I enjoyed the style quite a bit, barring some space for polishing.Time is spent in the early chapters building up the character of Leo, though some of the scenes chosen for character building might feel a little inconseuquential, which the author understandably has to walk a fine line between slice of life stories and log of everything that happens to one's day.Speaking which, the pacing does remind me of the pacing of the first fate visual novel, where we start the story with one character then cut the perspective away and follow another for the next few chapters until they meet again.Keep at it!
After reading 50 chapters I would like to say a couple of things. The writing isn’t the best however still readable. However the update stability looks quite good and the plot progression was a little unique, but I honestly have no idea where the author is going with the romance, Adriana who is the fl loves both the mc and the prince which decreased my immersion quite a bit and the fight scenes are not really that vivid to the mind. There are good things as well such as that the mc appears to have a hidden backstory which didn’t appear in the novel and the interaction between characters appear quite realistic. Overall quite a decent read I would have liked to read more before making the review but I ran out of passes and There are a lot of chapters left, so if there had been more free chapters that would have been better.
The number of times that the words "envy, jealousy, activity (means sex), ass, breast," repeating each paragraph makes me crazy, it never always changes the same speech, always the same thing we know that the hero is good at sex we understood, we clearly understood after 100 chapter with the same thing develop a MC level power instead of stagnating everything, ****!
I read up to 5 chapters and the characters are annoying, especially the MC. I know it is a quick judgment of the whole story but the MC is unbearable for me. I have the author's other book in bookmarks and I hope it is not like this one.
Really fun read with enjoyable characters. The story is also really compelling with a bit of a twist on the typical transmigration trope.
AWESOME NOVEL, TOTALLY RECOMMEND IT!!!............................................................................................................................
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If I were to be honest, this was one of the best novels I had read, and even if it was 4 months ago I still remember the storylone of this novel, which I rarely do on others so Webnovel, Please, bring this novel back to your list.
???? amazing I need more ❤️❤️❤️❤️please update soon
Good to readGood to spent the timeHeart warmingYou will like it for sureOk i give u 5★ so more chapters please hahahaNext was experience for me hahahaha
Sorry, but how many chapters per week?, or when do you plan to update because i don't really want to visir here everyday to see if there is an update or not.
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