Jace nodded, "It's going to be dangerous and a lot of people are going to die. I'm a knight so I will be in the thick of it. I talked with Jisa and should I die, she will take you into the family and you and Aziva will be taken care of."
A sigh escaped his mouth and his friend smacked his head without an inch of hesitation.
"I don't believe you. People can say anything to save their lives. If I let you go now, you will try to kill the weaker members of my clan and plot to kill me. Killing you now will give me peace of mind."(Bai Heng)
AUTHORS NOTE:::: -----> (MORE THAN 500 CHARACTERS LOL)
charlie almost squealed when batman looked at him
Oh my god:???????? . Sunset Agassi, please don't leave. Can you please sue them and stay? I'm gonna miss this story alot
"...." still not saying anything and just giving me a blank stare.
"...Rei Dragã.," said Rei, who was now stared at by all but May.
The End!
I need to talk about Qingli because something about this character is really sticking with me after reading this passage. 'Got it, got it. I won't delay you from going out with your friends.' That repetition of 'got it' feels like someone who has heard this conversation before. Maybe not these exact words, but the same pattern: someone has plans, Qingli is the one who makes sure everything else runs smoothly, and Qingli's own desires are secondary. The phrase 'I won't delay you' is doing a lot of emotional labor here. It's not just agreement—it's self-effacement. Qingli is positioning themselves as someone who won't be a burden, who will make the sacrifice without making the other person feel guilty about it. And then the speaker responds with 'You come with me, send sister-in-law home, and then you can leave.' This is where the relationship dynamics get really interesting. The speaker is giving Qingli an assignment, not an invitation. 'Come with me' sounds warm but the rest of the sentence reveals it's really 'you are coming because I need you to do something.' The sister-in-law relationship is the third piece of this triangle. Who is she to the speaker? To Qingli? The fact that Qingli is being tasked with escorting her home suggests some kind of trust—maybe familial, maybe something more complicated. Is Qingli close to the sister-in-law? Are they strangers? The text doesn't say, but I'm betting the answer matters a lot to the story. What's striking is that Qingli doesn't push back. They don't say 'why me' or 'can't someone else do it.' They just... accept. That tells me Qingli is either very used to being the reliable one, or very afraid of saying no. Both interpretations make this character feel real and layered. I find myself wondering what Qingli actually wants to do with their evening. Do they have friends too? Do they have somewhere they'd rather be? The fact that the text doesn't ask these questions is kind of devastating, honestly.
"Arrogance wouldn't bring you anywhere."
Chakra Control: A+