Amazing book, brilliant character development and sad it has few chapters...
This novel had a great potential but author destroyed it by his own hands. This is typically a Skyrim a Skyrim fanfic. Zero realism and world building (initially there was some, but author wanted to ruin it so badly). *spoiler* After tutorial arc since there are no deaths, people can revive unlimited times, there is literally no thrill at all. Author does not have any idea where to lead the story. whimsical writing. MC literally does not have any advantage for having dual. Instead he is weak, gets overpowered by enemies time to time. Even other players who don't have any advantage technically, can easily give MC hardtime for his life. This story was not meant to be written by this author is all I can say. Totally wasted potential.
thought it would be good but its really quite boring---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
This is just amazing... and I just love egotistical mcs... like the truly egotistical ones...lol... It gives that "the way of a demon lord" vibe or "life of a villain"... the story is amazing... Although I don't like the idea of the mc succumbing to the queen and just going along with her plans.. but I'm sure that will change as the story progresses
Two lost people who met by accident or... maybe it wasn't an accident, but a fate, their destiny to cross each other path... The plot is so intriguing, the two main characters also. You pay attention to the language you use so it's a pleasure to read.Excellent work!
G'day matesOne of the better romance novels I've read on this site. The grammar is good, I have yet to find an error. The story is also great so far, and I am looking forward to more chapters.If you are a potential reader looking through the comments, read this book! You won't be disappointed.
I love the plot of this book and all the love story
This is after reading around 46 chapters.The story is nice and relaxing but after about ch 40, the name of the characters and companies change to weird ones, that three me off, so I dropped it. Example: Battling birds webcast platform became live broadcast of bird fights.
Yes, I'm giving it a five star.why?It's awesome.secondly, I won't say much about the novel. I'd rather let it speak for itself. It starts off different to other system novels in my opinion. But the fun begins straight from the start.A villain mc is something I didn't know I had in me. But look what we got here.
It’s a 5/5 for me. The mc is hilarious giving the novel a comedic undertone. The power system is not completely explained yet but they seems good. Thanks you author for writing this novel!
Good, but expecting more, I think author should release 2 chapter per day, very interesting story all the best, bring more character so that the story is interesting, tell about farzana allahamahut alban, so it will be more interesting
IN LOVE WITH THIS BOOKA GREAT STORY!I love everything about this book from the synopsis to all the chapters.It is something I normally enjoy reading but I enjoy reading this so much more.woww