ElIgor
Great ... I'm now reading a Villain POV Mc
Actually a pretty good novel if you take away the smut. The smut scenes weren't that interesting to me, so I skip most of those chapters and continued along with the story.
The end was shit
I just don’t like how the girls just play with the main character.
I'm in love with this chapters. Now I'm just waiting for everything to go right between them and the lovey dovey arc can start. Also I love Ryder
it was fine, not my favorite, went back and try to read from the beginning, but still not loved it
Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice no e
I feel sad for Evanthe and Seirra. They don't have life partners ???. And the fathers of their children already have family
I've read up to chapter 70 so far. I liked the fan fiction in many ways. But there are also bad sides, I absolutely did not like time travel, that is, not time travel itself, but how it is served here. I hope it gets better. (Translator)
story has rich world building, the characters are pretty well defined, mc has sense of humor , his actions are logical.
Only 22 chaps in but stuff feels rushed and there are random jumps in between words. The grammar isn’t the best but it’ getting better as the story progressess. It’s a good book but there is a lot of stuff that needs improvement. Other than that no more complaints
Another story from one of my favorite authors Dashlin, if you like an evil, selfish mc, who doesn't care about age, who won't let any woman he likes escape from his clutches even if they are blood related, this novel is for you. (by a certain author I love you very much, and I know that this is not an obligation nor do I have the right to ask for it, but I hope you don't leave it, although well, I will still support you if you decide to leave it and write another novel ( =^ω^) )
