Well this is a very good story, l haven't gone deeper but l am intrigued by the plot and the journey of the story, but l think u should like make less characters, wat l mean is if u pump too much info about the names of characters readers will easily forget and it would just confuse us like the guardians it will take quite some time to know all of their names and l think u should have brought them in slowly for a deeper impact, but its good you have a deep understanding of your novel and would love it if u published more ?
This well-written piece is an easy and relaxing read. I enjoyed the world building and looking forward for more!Keep up the good work!
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A refreshing new novel i have started to read. Have seen some of the old man reincarnated/transmigrated etc. This one doesn't seem like a maniac. Going to keep reading this book. Keep up the good work!
It's such a promising novel.I definetly enjoyed reading it.?????????????????????????????????????????
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Racist garbage that had already been translated up to a few hundred chapters previously, so it isn't even "new". This is one of those chinese novels that panders to their hatred of anything "western" and cultures outside of their own. It flaunts it in nearly every chapter later on, almost like the author is trying to over compensate for something really.
Hey author, I hope you're still here, and I hooe you remember me. While you had dropped this story, I also hope you dont mind I made a story on Wattpad(I know, the gayish story app, but still has gold within a pile of pup) based on your story, but get rid of the cringe misogynist of poor writing villains and add more plot and twist, more chapters, more world building, more magic, more battles, and MORE SLAUGHTER FOR THE HUMANS!Yeah, I just increased the difficulty level. While gate is easy level, japan summons is mid level, your story is at the hard level, mine just straight up Dark Souls level.Just imagine fighting against a kilometer size sea monster, 5 demon lords, and Orcs that can walk on water like jesus. Yeah, thats what im going to do.And if you like to, you can check it out
Its a great start to a novel, the pacing is good and the world is interesting. In some areas, it could use an editor though, there are some sentences that come off a little weird. But as of chapter 44 its been a fantastic read. Keep it up.
This book is very interesting. It's not just overpowering everyone and all that, it really feels like a genuine experience. Anyway, it's set in a vrmmo with a wuxia setting but I think that it's most prominent elements are mystery and a slice of life feel. I kike the character of the mc too.
For the love of god finally a cultivation MC.who is actually ambitious .I dont know whats up with these chinese mcs that remove all semblance of ambitoon from the MC