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Good start. If this is Author's first story then yeah. The storytelling is good. Anyway, after reading the available chapters, you'll get curious about their past, What the heck really happened... Want to know more about the MCs... keep it up!
Overall Great Story. Too Complex for me to talk about it all, but in a dystopian(?) world with unique details, and characters that are lively and easy to get attached to, it is simply hard to not like it.
i smell something good here hehehe
Updates seem to be good, but there are many silly mistakes, which shouldnt be there, like sometimes he writes something small, the next time he writes it bigMc is okay, and I like him, by why does he want to kill his little sis just for a bit of power, god, you are the author of the novel, are you that useless?Big world, rest seems fine
TO BE BLUNT THE AUTHOR IS STEALING FROM HIS READERS. I'll admit this novel is pretty good but if your about to start this novel and updating stability is important to you, I suggest you don't . the author has a bad habit of disappearing a week before the end of the month and then posting like 2 chapters after the privilege has reset, it's happened so many times, i have a hard time believing it's not intentional. Also sometimes he disappears a week after the month starts without any explanation then comes back a few days before the month ends with 2 chapters and a sad story about why he disappeared. I understand that I might sound harsh but he has done this so many times that I'm starting to think that he's just trying to garner sympathy from his readers so they would buy the privilege again next month. Honestly this novel has what it takes to be ranked #1 but the author's deceptive habit is holding it back.
The grammar was pretty bad; I could say he's not native to English like me. Although I like the story, I need to translate it in my head. Anyways, well done; I'll at least appreciate the hard work.
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Can anyone tell me if there is a raw to this? I don't if this will get selected or not does anyone the another name for this novel if do tell.
I like this novel a lot. It's amazing. The only thing that I don't like is the harem.????? It would fine if Das was just with Elena or at maximum with Elena and Lier. But now we have an AI, the teacher and a lot of girls near him.?? That's what I don't like. But except for that, great story??????
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