very interesting i hope it develops at a fast pace but also doesn't confuse with jumping between characters pov it feels like it's gonna pull me into the story.
Marvelous storyline?Please continue the chaptersYou being a new writer have a very good idea The description about the past life of sunny and his surroundings(room) is like some professional is there with you.Nevermind, you are good writer keep going
I just have to say Emilia is my absolute favorite character hands down. I don’t even know why, but she just hits different. This novel feels like a hidden gem. The fight scenes, the comedy and characters all on point it feels like I'm literally in the book. This is peak storytelling, and it’s honestly criminal how underrated it is. Amazing work, author. Please, please don’t stop posting
I sincerely apologize for the mistake in the format earlier. Since I wasn’t familiar with it, I made an error, and I’m sorry for the poor experience it may have caused.
This in an overall good read, I’ll recommend this book
The story is good, the plot sucks me in every chapter, making me yearn for more, the Characters are interesting and the only complaint i have are the lack of chapters, I love it, please don't stop, because I love it
Hey I love this story. This is very good also there is a copy of this book on web novel. So if you find it try to give it one star because I hate it when others copy someones hard work.
Well it's a pretty decent read. just like shadow hack but still okay. if you're ready to close your eyes then you wont feel the cringe moments too much and if you're ready to close your eyes again you won't notice the loopholes since it's covered up badly. Average enough to get 4 stars.
Here are my honest thoughts based on what I read so far and I am sorry if it's offended you:World Building: I do like the world-building in this novel because first, it's quite interesting with the superpower people reigning the whole city and becoming a corrupt monster at hierarchy. The atmosphere and the situation of the world was pretty fine. However, this is my personal preference in honesty, I suggested for you to give more description about the environment. So, it can make the world clearer and easier to imagine.Characters: The characters so far it's quite decent. The main character is getting some vibe of the underdog and I do really like his struggle always being pushed than when in the critical decision, he decided to fight back. I also like the main character is quite a nice guy as he helped other too. However, there is some problem of how he got his power, it felt quite random when he got the wind power. The foreshadowing of obtaining in the early chapter wasn't enough and it felt he just randomly being blessed. Therefore, there is an easy way to fix it which is I think you expand and give more about his reaction to getting the power.As for the side characters, so far they are all fine especially with Haley. I knew she was meant to portray like that and the execution-wise is okay for now. Hence, Haley can have an interesting development in the future.Writing: The writing may had some Capital errors, but it's didn't disturb the flow since it's an easy problem solve. I meant you can just recheck. However this is my gripe about the writing, the backstory appearing in the introduction. I knew you want to make the people know about the character, but describing more about their body language, reaction, and even the way they talk in dialogue can make the character more engaging. Backstory is fine in my opinion, but I suggested not in the same chapter of their introduction. So it can give readers and me personally more time know them as a person especially you can expand the interaction or the body language when sees something happening.Overall: It's pretty nice book and have a quite clear direction where this is going. I am going to say sorry again if my critic was quite harsh and it's okay for you to disagree. Therefore, keep up the good work and good luck.
I would have given a 5 star but ... ? Creation is hard cheer me up, Motivate me by reading and commenting, I will update every day. I can assure, you're in for a captivating plots and twists. Hope you enjoy the story ❣️ I will come back to make it 5 star if I see 10 reviews ??
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This is the second novel I'm trying. I hope people may like this, as there are very less fan fictions of cartoons. I wanted to create a better story but now other villains and heroines will be added. Please support my work and send me love❤✌