I love this book, Yan Yan seems like a real guy
Trust me and read till the 50th chap.I was pretty annoyed at first by some actions the MC has done, but he's like a completely different person now.The story gets better and better, and if continues like this, I believe it has a chance of being on top.
The first impression I got from reading this book was how clean the writing style was. With the perfect blend of words and a very intriguing plot. The supernatural and underworld are always interesting topics and top it off with mages and an anti-magic power ML, it all comes together very nicely. So far I have loved the character designs, they are three-dimensional, and one can see their individuality. The book holds a lot of promise and I would love to see in which direction the writer takes it. A perfect blend of mystery and fantasy it is so far. Updates are stable and the chapter length is just the right amount. Fantasy readers should give this one a chance. Good luck author, all the best for the future.
Wow, bagus kak, sudah tegang dari awal, belum apa2 sudah di bawa ke medan perang taunya cuma flashback?? lega banget, ada gunanya juga saya mantengin upin ipin bisa mengerti bahasa melayu ini?semangat kak nulisnya????
This is probably the first time I wish a character did not isekai lol. As an assassin he's so cool ha. I wished we'd seen that plotline a bit more. But my obsession with Assassins aside, this is a quality read. I love that the author incorporates details in the storyline from his old life to details of the new world. I'm sure his previous life's experience will really shape his new life in an interesting way. Good job Author :D
For the Authors first novel, it is pretty good, the way the author introduces cultivation levels, weapon levels is good, unlike other novels that make a whole chapter about the author uses the mc to ask questions about cultivation levels and then another character will explain, its pretty good. but I have discontinued reading due to payed chapters, i cant afford it nor do I have the time to login to get free pass. I believe webnovel (qidian) was stupid to remove add watching for chapters. (watch an add to unlock a chapter if you couldn't afford ) qidian is a scam for money, alot of chapters on novels cost around 12 , 20 coins to unlock.
Loved reading this book, Such amazing work, love the characters, the grammar the story, everything was loud and clear. Keep it up Author ? Highly recommended.
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It's really fun to read!The story is currently in it's very early stages but the world building and character development have been really good so far. I loved Zhou because of how realistic he is (also cause he's cynical and I love that in a person). And I've dubbed Toshiro as Toshi boy simply because he's too naive and innocent in my opinion.The POV change was executed brilliantly. So smooth, so neat and also so easy to pick up on!The grammar is very good. The chapters are short and don't have any unnecessary details. This kept me interested in reading till the end.I loved the content that I have read till now and have added this to my library!
I am being harsh on this novel because I enjoyed it, and I would certainly like to see it get better. I will talk about my main few peeves about this novel.First, there is absolutely no tension. There are no special points in the novel that make your blood boil or you feel excited. The MC is just invincible, such that you know he’s never going to lose. When overpowered is a tag, you would expect to be a kind of face slapping novel right? Wrong. And that is a kind of segue into my next point.Second, I am not feeling any direction really. Perhaps that is because the story is still in it’s opening parts, the story is just meaningless babble for now. The MC has no purpose really, he just wanders around, with his students or some other people. In reality, this is probably what he is trying to do, but it’s no fun watching an MC without purpose.Third, just a minor peeve of mine, the name of the novel is Professor Kal. Yet, he is basically sidelined for a while as some of the higher status characters discuss, and his students go off on adventures of their own for what feels to be a greater part of the novel to me. Even though he is in certain scenes, his presence is barely noticeable as a reader.Fourth, I have just realized this as of writing the review, but Kal has made no progress. Just like in a certain manga, Rent-A-Girlfriend, I thought it was good just because I was having fun, but looking back, no progress was made. The only substantial things were Kal getting a job and taking in a student. Everything else has basically not mattered at all.Fifth and last, one of the most minor things, wording is kind of funky sometimes, but those were in the earlier chapters, and those problems have mostly gone away for now. Now, to talk about the good parts of this story. The MC is a great realist. He doesn’t do things without benefit for himself. Next, the side characters are given the time they need to shine, they have distinct personalities. However, the problem with this, is that people get bored easily, and I tended to skim over such things. More good parts are that there is almost definitely a deeper plot happening here, but if there is no payout after waiting all that time, I doubt I’ll stick around any longer. Basically, there are situations with time put into being read, but there is no sufficient payout to justify that reading time put in. I feel like author needs to make these situations have more payout for the reader, for spending their time reading all this, because I have only felt minor payouts in the form of small jokes, but I haven’t found anything exceptionally interesting or comedic.Alright, I should end my tangent here. I’m being harsh on this novel because I want it to improve, of course, there’s no denying the possibility that it has already been improved, since I haven’t read to the latest chapter yet. However, I would still like my thoughts to be known.Writing quality: 4/5Story development: 2/5Character design: 4/5World bg: 3/5
Well its a nice story . Im reading other review and agrred about the combat power the MC, the other its good ✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?✌?
THE NOVEL RAW IS 御兽：我能听到兽宠的心声 . I HAVEN'T READ IT SO IDK . I'M GOING TO START SO CHAOO