MasterDaoist
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Very detailed character and world development,Great storytelling and good plotline.I really look forward to the upcoming chapters.good luck to both the author and the book.
stupid main character with no structure. he shows his talent,stats all of them to guys who he has just met. I kinda got it that author is trying to put realism in it and I liked that but showing talent and your stats out easily is just utterly stupid. I mean any normal guy out there won't do it.
This is what I hoped all system/gacha stories should aspire towards. Fantastic worldbuilding where the author fleshes out the meat behind the summoning system and the lives of the gacha characters within. Even the world seems like it could make sense in a gacha game. The main character and the side character have been super interesting too.
Metaphorica and action mixed in perfection! The narration was at its finest and was a game maker in this novel. I am engrossed with a variety of words and my tongue feels like a poet dancing in the words whilst playing while I read. This is phenomenal, I got to read these kinds of novels to improve my vocabulary! Kudos! Quality at its finest!
the biggest problem the story has is things that happen off screen. information is obtained, system ui is explored, and abilities are obtained without any reader knowledge.The entire digital realm and what that means is ignored entirely, acting the same as a system-magic transmigration to another atom-based world.the final major problem I can think of is that mc has changed class three times already and I have no idea what that means, if it means anything.the above being said, it's a fun story with developed characters that are different from each other and interact in funny and interesting ways. character growth may be abrupt, but it's better than stagnant characters.
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I had high hopes for this novel. The story development and character design is below average. It simply has no taste in short, I don't know why someone recommended me this
So far so good! Actually system' novel is not really my thing. But the author make it easy to follow and understand. I really enjoy ur writing and already read all the published chapter (Chp 14). Can't waiting for read more.
I love this book! It sounded interesting but once I started reading it I couldn't stop. I caught up in two days and lost a lot of sleep which should tell you how good the book is.
❤❤ First the cover is amazing. The way the story began and the way it takes one in is great, you can help but want to read more and more. The Mc is likeable and I can't help but root for him.Good book.
Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover.The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author .I enjoy your work .recommended:)
