The thing I hate most is how the MC still acts human even though hes a monster now and has none of the Instincts of one either. Whats the point of the MC turning into a monster when he uses it every 200 or so chapters... I was really hoping he would give into his beast instincts and use it much more often. There is hardly any MC monster novels and the only reason i started reading was someone told me that he abandoned his human form later and became an ancient monster. Once he does become one he reverts back to human... What the hell is the point of him becoming one? this pisses me off. Human fighting other Humans in novels is starting to become so over used. there needs to be more mix ups. The best way to fix this is easy. THIS IS A VAST UNIVERSE BUT EVERYONE IS HUMAN WTF.
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*******************Author's Statement********************Worth a Reading and giving this LN a shot because of what the Author said.Quoting the Author:"I understand the points you've made, and you're, right. When I first started writing this, I was no a professional(heck I arent .) but the plot at the beginning was allover the place and since there were things I couldn’t change without properly rewriting the story, I worked around them and tried to make them better and more realistic.One things I'm sure I got right from The beginning was my MCs stupidity and sometimes foolish decisions. It helped me shape him into the person he turns out to be. The harem route was a spur of the moment decision I shouldn't have made, so to solve that blunder I made them important side characters. They never lost their relevance as the story is as much about the supporting cast as the main character.Everything you've complained about, I've tried to solve down the line. And believe it wasn't easy, but I Had a lot help from my readers. They helped save my story and made me a better writer. The first three of four dozen chapters weren't really good. But I learnt to be better after, so please, I know I'm being selfish or something, but give Kael one more chance. If you get to 100 and its still bad, then you can kick it to the curb. I'm sorry the earlier chapters did not make it worth your while, but give me a chance to redeem myself, and my story. "
I have read few chapters so far, and it has been a fun ride. The constant confrontation between the Host and its system is fun to watch. The idea itself is pretty interesting. It is a great story, and I will continue to read it.
Author Lvl: GreatNotable work: Monster FactoryNo of Works: 2Website: Qidian CNStatus: CompleteViews: 5.28 million+Recommendation: 0.31 million+Rating: 8.7/10 from 480 readersDiscussion/Comments: 94Word count: 0.76 million+Chapters: 256Stats may not be reliable for this novel because it's old and also this novel is the first novel on this site for the author of 'Monster Factory'.
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As a Chinese reader who's here just to check out the English version of my favorite web novel, I just want to say that the translation doesn't even convey half the beauty and wit of the original novel, there are so many good parts that the translation left out. Even the author said once that she didn't think Doomsday Wonderland would make a good translated novel, but even so, now that I've read it, it doesn't look bad to me; it looks as if it could have been originally written in English, the translators did a fantastic job. But I still have to add, the original version is even better!!Also I'm really disappointed that the novel was cut due to a lack of popularity, because hell, this novel is still going strong here where I am and it's already been updated to 1702 chapters as of today, so why is Webnovel cutting this??? I just can't understand. Pleeeease pick it up soon. I'd just do the translation myself but that would be piracy.
I too want a 100 millions mansions all by this one lake
I really like the plot, and the cover as well.
Keep writing the episodes are gettig better
Really exciting! Manhattan author!
arranged marriage and family drama....nicee