THis book def gives the vibe of a orignal.Trust me it get's better with time the start is not well fleshed out though.aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I read the story until about chapter 23. The story was okay even with the grammar issues. However around chapter 18 the plot started to deteriorate and I ended up skimming the next 5 chapters. Due to the plot deteriorating even more over those chapters I could not bring myself to continue reading this story.
You have a way with words. Thank you for spending the time to write this novel. It’s truly beautiful. I don’t remember the last time I read something this good. It’s quite amazing, and I hope you publish more things soon.
JustReally cringyMC is a card boardEvery one is a card board.................................................. ...........................
Isn’t this pretty much a fanfic? How is it even legal to demand coins to read this story?............. ............. ............. .............
I absolutely recommend this to everyone who wants something new to read and it got 800+ chapters ongoing in raw so we're not gonna run out of chapters to read anytime soon . Honestly i really hope it goes over 2000+ chapters before it ends . ありがとう ございます ?????????? !!!View More
can you please give me the raw for this novel......................................................................................................................................
Even within the group of sign in novels, this one is lackluster. The system is not explained properly, the MC makes questionable choices, the other characters are a bunch of idiots (including his sister). I suggest you save your time for one of the better stories offered this week.
Today I'm tired so I wont leave as detailed a review as I normally do.The main problem with this book is that it is painful to read.It is not emotionally painful to read, and not badly written painful to read.It is 'why the hëll did THIS happen?' painful to read.Like I said, I'm tired, don't wanna explain much, so I'll give just one example.MC is born again in a disgüstingly mütilated body. Fine.Young master is törturing her. Okay.Wants her to get räped. Fine.Lacky comes in, thinks she's too disgüsting. Okay.Young master gets distracted. MC tries to escape.The 'loyal' servant of the MC UNEXPECTEDLY shouts when he sees she's escaping, alerting the young master. He'd been watching leisurely btw. And he's loyal, according to the story. I kid you not.All of this is okay.Then there's the system. I don't like how it works. At all.Why 5 stars?Because it's yuri. And the story can improve as it goes on. I'll probably come back to read it once it has more chapters.
if only cuttlefish would get a translation that respects his skills
Lmao the summary look relatable as hell im 100 percent gonna read this.Also why cant a review be lesser then 140 charaterAlso is there a review sect?
Way better then I expected from trial read and it's novel title/synopsis. The character doesn't get an instant oh I have 100% block or 100% damage reflection passive instantly.