MangoManFantasy
it's a very good novel..it has a good start and the story is very interesting ( everyone must give a try)..⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐??????????????????????
I hope manhwa will be created based on this story. ?????????????????????????????????????????????
Author: I came here just to explain few things, first of all english is not my first or second it's the fourth language, and the only perfect sentence which my teacher praised was in eighth grade, later I never got any good marks, sigh. But I want to share the world and idea which seemed to be shared on the death stake, lol. Second thing is that this story has well thought out chapter numbers and drafts, I wrote the Arch's number in the notebook too and how many chapters will be in total are already decided.Last but not least, do express your words about the story, will answer whoever has rational question, xD
? WARNING: There is too much propaganda against neighboring Asian countries in here. To Japanese and Korean readers, you've been warned.?For translation quality, it's good, albeit there are critical typos that should be fixed asap?I have no comment for the updates because it's on trial state yet I'll just give it an average score.?Story development is predictable and there's too much cliche. You can find all the selling points of some old novels placed in here. That sounds good right? But in reality, it makes it mediocre. While reading this novel, you will always have this feeling like: "Hey, I've read this before!"?Character design is old?World Background is just so-so. It's not vague but if you think about it, you would knit your brows.I can recommend this to new readers but not the others who are accustomed to reading Chinese Wuxia or xianxia.
