I love it a lot as it is great and lovely... I will repeat this sentence as I have nothing else to sayAlso can anyone give me some suggestions for good books about bookworms prefferebly if its magic related and NOT harem
I have tk say the the chapter were so drawing to read that I could stop reading I got through half the book in a day. It was insane u haven't ? that happy to read and fall asleep in a book Ina while.
I'm just gonna lay this out here. The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Then becomes a slave. Then leaves. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Seriously. Its like the author added every damn random thought he had to the story. He's inventing rockets and, I **** you not, takes a boat half way around the planet to introduce fucking paintball to the virtual worlds version of a tech fair. This is a guy who's apparently invented A.I. in the game world by the way.I'm so done with this **** show mash up of a story.
its just god mode 24/7 + teenage love. I just cat read this novel. If u are 15years old or less you can try it. But for anyone 16+ it will be a terrible novel.
First 10 chapter is boring af... But after that kinda interesting!! Need more chapter please...Make you feel curiousThe review must 140character idk what to write anymore -,-"
This is so meta. Lol. I'm reading a webnovel about webnovel on webnovel. This is just gold. 10/10. Meta comedy gold. Next level divine thick skin.
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My first impressions from the first few chapters is that the writer didn't do very much research or preparation. The world building and storytelling is shaky with poor background and people showing up and doing things almost inexplicably. Characterization is almost non-existent. I don't hold out much hope for this story at this point.
it's a great book I would like to read some more chapters when they come out.i think that the character change was awesome and I believe this will develop into an awesome book.
I must the first chapter is an original way to start out the novel. However, I must say it really picks up later. So, I must say that both his sister and mother better be in the harem. Heh, I especially love the cute scenes between the MC and the sister. Good ole’ booty spanking for punishment. Heheheee. I also hope that she is his first time to be honest. I also wish that the girls actually stay relevant throughout the story and not a vase. Like, make them useful for the MC if you get what I’m saying. Anyways, I do hope the author finishes this novel since I get the feeling that this novel will quite good if the author keeps up with the good work so far. (Only on chapter 6 so far) Go team Xiao Che and Xiao Tan!!!! Also, I think the harem should be around 10 girls give or take. Heh, whatever is fine to be honest. Just make the girls stay relevant. Anyways, keep up the good work author!
Best book ever! Like all Muse books !
Great start so far! Please update!