From the first 20 chapter, this is the only interesting trial read novel this week, pretty good translation, no gender mix up, name not mixed up.
I just read to about 200 chapters but I can't continue, I tried, but the pace is so slow, his cultivation is so low, yes, he can fight people way above his level but I dunno, it just isn't for me.Author did a great job with the writing though, I especially love the first few chapters, they got me hooked!
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Really well written and compared to a lot of other MMORPG type novels this one is probably 100x better that them. Whether it be writing quality, story development, character design, and world background this novel is way superior.
the story isn't that fast nor slow I think it's on the right track the story doesn't enter the game in the first chapter it's great that you put a backstory before the mc even went to play the game
The first few chapters that I've read was really engaging, I love the start of the book and the character design is awesome
I gotta say this a good quality story. I think the biggest upside is just the mentality of the MC. He fully encapsulates a monster in human skin, and he is written well. The main downside is of course the update rate of the novel, but I can’t blame the author for having more success with other stories.
its got potential and it's alright it's has some small kinks other it's fine along with being apart of the small number of kingdom building novels which I wish there were more of
Please release this novel fast..... If possible put it on priority..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Not what I was looking for.Let's start with the good things - grammar is pretty good, updates are frequent, most of the characters are believable.Unfortunately, I can't read a story where an MC should be a 32 yo man, but behaves according to his new age of 12. Literally nothing of his behavior suits his alleged mental age. And when I see a teenager protagonist I drop the story on the spot, no exceptions.The story also has a dense teenager romance going on, which is always a turn off. Oh, and the system has mandatory quests with punishments for failing aka the worst kind of system. But system stuff is not a focus of the novel and generally only used to show people's stats, so that part is bearable.
This story has a smooth progression and draw me in immediately. Characters development is placed well and no gaps in the storyline so far... I would love to read more of the novel, please update ??
Warning for new readers:This novel takes a lot of time to build up, the first 100 chapters are only enough to help the reader understand the power system better. A lot of people accuse the start as fillers but it is extremely necessary for later plot so don't skip it.Furthermore, the power system is taken from Pathfinder (a dnd game) so prepare for NUMBERS.