look too much good laughing non stop like no tomorrow
Great book so far! Taking you through the roller coaster of emotions from jealousy to sadness. Both the Fl and ML are flawed characters that seem to grow as the novel goes on. I just hate the mean secondary characters but I suppose you always need them to add spice to the story. I’m into character growth and also love connections so looking forward to the main couple growing together and beating up their enemies!
Interesting premise and great story telling. However, writing needs improvement. Characters seem a bit bland. The book shows promise and has the potential to grow even further. Don't dwell much on the past mistakes, keep improving from the current chapter onwards and you'll do good :)Update stability is good. Keep updating daily. I wish you luck :)
He is one heck of a overthinkning bastard. Gotta hand it to the author reallu, i am pretty sure you could write an entire chapter with just his thoughts.
The writing quality really needs updated. Just a lot grammar mistakes.
holy hell dude !! I've read more than 1000 books in this app and the books that captivated me to read every word aren't even in double digits.This is one of them. Only 13 chapters in but I can feel how good this book will become. The emotions described in the novel is realistic. Main character is cautious. even though you said edgy mc, he doesn't feel like one (for good reason because i don't really like edgy mc). kinda reminds me of Kahn from hero of darkness ( another 5/5 novel imo). good going man. I'm way too hyped for this novel.
So good for now. I will update my review once I read more.
Still shamelessly giving myself 5 stars.Please note the following before reading.1. The demon king is absolutely obsessed with his wife.2. The main characters absolutely can't keep their hands off of each other. To find out the reason for that, you will have to read and find out!3. They have sex super fast, but before the feelings catch up to the smutty part, that will take a while for our sassy angel.4. The romance is just as important as the fantasy part of this novel. Prepare for quite a bit of lore. 5. Once at chapter fifty you will find some sort of fun activity for all readers who have made it that far. If you are interested, you can join!I write for people who dislike overly complicated relationships; as such, there won't be misunderstandings that span like over 40 chapters. There is much lore to be read after all. Have fun!
I'm greedy. I just want more ☺☺☺☺keep it up
Hi this is Brandon gould I just read the first three chapters of your book and I am also a up and coming writer I will give your book a review if you go over and look at my book Demonsong and give it a review Of the chapters I read the story seems to be moving at a good speed, you should try to make more paragraphs so it is a bit more readable and if someone is supposed to be talking either to themselves or other people you put "" so that symbolizes that they are talking I did like it seems very interesting and unique
keep going don't stop writing this is the Best fanfic because of his clan I was waiting for a fanfic like this bro.
This is a epic story. I like how Zion’s journey from tragedy to Titan grips with vivid world-building, intense stakes, and the ultimate battle for existence’s balance.