Sounds interesting but I'd really like to know a few things first like "Is it a harem?" or "Is it completed?
D*mn i don know the fault lies in author or translator. But its very confusing. Between first realm and eight realm which one is stronger or qhich path need to take? In there some of it first realm are strongest but that ling xian eight realm are stronger than seven realm. Its straight confusing cause the translator not even try help differentiate the cultivation path and the stage. Its actually cause the "unkown" path and stage that makes this novel poor and again the translator not even attemt to help
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For people that writed a review after 5 chaps.. well this one has a slow start, also what you can expect is a parallel world which other worlds try to invade constantly, people that awaken powers + from the monsters killed they can become summoners and something that is not unexpected, Huaxia is powerful, also it seems that the power of summoners are somehow related to Chinsese Mythology, but well no racsism as of yet, still you have to bear with China being the center of the world eh something normal if you read here.
I already finished the raw, and I must say that I was satisfied with the story -No harem-No arrogant Mc-There are a few legendary "young masters
Overall... The story is very food. I just have one very irritating problem...Alex is way too passive and a pushover. At first it comes off as very kind and humble, then it became pretty stupid, to annoying then very irritating. He has all that money and connections but can't even protect is girlfriend. He literally promised to her dying mother that he would do everything to protect her daughter. It would have been ok if all those tragedy only happens to him but no, debbie suffers the worst. Actually I was kinda relieved that Debbie escaped this sorry excuse of a man, then she would probably can live peacefully. I mean if he really loved Debbie he should have announced to the whole world the she is the future Mrs. Ambrose that way no one would dare to put their hand on her. I get that he would prefer not to be seduced by a bunch of gold diggers, and like to lay low, but if he truly loves Debbie he would endures those things for her... Just want to get my thoughts out of my head and find someone to rant.And for the Author...I know it is written like this for the sake of the further part of the story, but its just too much. Who would endure something like this if they have the ability to prevents those events from happening, especially seeing his significant other being tormented. At least put some little satisfying moments every now and then. And please just kill Cathy...
interesting Book its nice sanbox themed read
Really hard to get into this novel, tried trekking on to see if it got any better but sadly it doesnt. Author's style of "teleporting" is very jarring and makes the pacing really off. If the synopsis of the novel has the author asking us to skip essentially 20-40 chapters because many people didnt enjoy the first 20 chapters, it really says something about the novel. Maybe a rework like they said they might do will improve it.
Send me your powerstones!!!!
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Will there be more regular released chapters now?
It's a really good read, plenty of action in the first few pages! My only criticism is the fact that there is barely any info on how he died or what his life was before, hopefully it will be sooner than later.