one of the most terrible first volumes I have ever seen. The writng is utter trash. the chapters are long and dull. The plot is slow moving. This story will never be a 5 star for that reason alone.Now. With that said. It does get better. A lot better. I was confused by all the 5star reviews until I got towards the end of volume 1. It is litrrally a 100x better. Volume 2 has made me laugh, cringe, and actually feel for these charcters. Yeah there were some bad moments in volume 2 but it is far from done. If you want my advice. Skim volume 1 and juts get the basic plot. Or at least skip to the end. Volume 2 is when this story realy does get good.Now there are some unforcunate choices in volume 1 that just break the story. Namely Hero's arc in volume 1. I do love his mini arc in volume 2 but it really makes no sense when you read volume1. honestly the two volumes feel like they were written by two diffrent people. 1 is mega dull, and 2 is just great with only a few sour moments. the story on its own isn't really bad I guess. some nice powerss here and there. some cool monsters there. It just needs a way better begining.
Really like this novel so far, the world setting is really interesting. Will you keep udating? Oh, and I'd love to join your dicord group and chat but the link is expired...
An amazing book, not gonna lie, I only picked it up to get the 200 points for a recommend book, but I'm glad I did. It gives an accurate and detailed description of the world, the characters, and the abilities. There are some spelling mistakes, but they are fat fingers or he went to fast an repeated something. But the Author fixes them very quickly once pointed out. The MC might be overpowered, but there isn't any plot armor and he is very smart. So it doesn't seem that way. Over all a very, very good book and I'm waiting for my next fast pass to read some more!
I adore this story!!! I'm about at the 90 chapter mark, but so far I've loved the plot! Unlike other stories who try and create a magic levelling system, which quickly becomes irrelevent in a matter of chapters, this author manages the systems very well, and also incorporates them in an interesting society, and economy. Touching on how the real world adapts to this new system, and how it affects the MC's decisions and his troubles. I can't think of any plot holes at the moment, however the author's writing style can be seen as clunky quite often, but never takes away from the story's atmosphere. Overall a really good story! Thank you to the author for bringing me a story unlike many others, and one I am obsessed with. I do not usually spend coins on stories, but this one made me bring out my wallet.
Nice literary work. Recommended for all.
The book is interesting! It's worth reading. God bless, author!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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can't stop reading it
how can i feel this
Beautiful writing!!!
enjoying this book so much can't wait to get to the happy ending