10/10 story, love the main character, love the not overpowered system', love everything, please keep updating
Fantastic start. Got hooked from the get go. Recommended to everyone
Fast-paced, That was what came to my mind after I read the novel. The author started slow and we were immediately catapulted into the meat of the story. We have Kurogane who was an orphan, his adopted father was killed forcing him to move back to Japan with his mother from America. As soon as they arrive, we started getting into the world of darkness and the vampire society. If fast pace novel and horror is your thing, give the novel a short.
June knew how stressed and tired Isabelle has been for the past months, with little to no sleep she tried her best to make everyone stronger and grow. She didn't have to work so hard, knowing that it wouldn't benefit her in the long run, but still she chose to give it her all. And everyone knew this. It's because of her deep longing to be extraordinary, that just being with them made her feel like she was one too.
first of all, it's a gorey story, so not for the faint of heart. The story is written in a way that it really captures your attention; it is immersive. The dialogues aren't just there to fill paper but are actually enjoyable. The main character has his own complexities but has never strayed from the path he's chosen.This isn't time pass material, you'll have to really sit down for this one. All in all, I recommend it to the lovers of antagonistic/cold blooded MCs.
Story is interesting but somtimes story pace is either very fast or slow, sometimes seems bit repetitive and there could be more character development as there is no interaction with student in 2&3 year in academy but dozens of time MC lost in self monolog and he only trains but still interesting and give it a try and update are delayed in past two months
I really love this novel but can you put a side chapter describing the characters after all we don't read the novel chapter after chapter we wait until we collect fifty or hundred chapters and after all that time it's hard to remember how the characters look like can you, please do that
I just wanted to say, thankyou. Reading a new kind of story really takes the tension off of my day. I am very immersed in this writing. Although the story has confusing parts, everything is explained as time goes by. Fantastic work by author.
Writing Quality: 3/5 Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording. Updating Stability: 5/5 I put everyone's like this. Story Development: 4/5 The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving. Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing) I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue. World Background: 4/5 I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world. In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.
I normally wouldn't have noticed this book, but just the name, along with the writer— it wouldn't be an understatement to say that I died of laughter
Hi guys, I'm sorry to announce next week, I won't upload any chapter(maybe) , My editor-san and I will fix all grammar and might change some of the storyline starts from Prologue, I will give the fix chapter tag (N). Once Again Sorry -Author-nim
A solid football novel, with good development of the mc and realistic pathways of development within the football industry. I am looking forward to where its future goes.