Luohuo
So far it is a great novel and very promising, I really like how the character is going, I hope that the author continues and has more chapters or else ... !!!! I do not care about the consequences, I am crazy hahaha hahaha hahaha! !!! ? ? ??
What is evil?!? What is good?!? These are just childish words and naive beliefs, there is no good and evil there are only benefits, the strong is the law doing what he wants, simply without drama. I wish I could see the real human beast break the shackles and unleash it. Devour the world and kill whoever gets in the way or kill to increase your strength, there is no such thing as the innocent and the bad, in front of the strong all are insects. Haha I have high expectations for you
Ooooh. The novel is good at the same time intriguing. The novel is arousing my curiosity, I will definitely add this to my library and will be waiting for the following chapters.
Pls update soonT-T!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
loved the novel, pls get picked. It's a great novel..no arrogant young master. well, rad the mlt to by frying my brain cell. pls, get selected...
good story, character development is also good. Update is very slow . it's more than a half and a year but still we got only sixty chapters .
Thank you for such a great piece of work..Don't drop and continue churning out this masterpiece.??????????????????????????????????
Finally catch up to C31. Its really horrible! The author is very speciesist. All the villainous baddies are human, this is very biased, as if only human does bad things in this world. Don't he know that most readers here are human? he actually being disrespectful to most readers here. Don't he know cats and dogs also do bad things? Why don't he make some American Shorthairs as the baddies?Don't he know that a gang = a wolf pack? Why he make human group as gang, but not wolves or dogs? ever heard the term : "human race"? yeah, so basically the author is racist.
The writing is very well. The world building is expectional with status on every enemy and action document the main characters. Would reccomended
After reading 10 chapters, I can't say what would distinguish this apart from any other offering in the MMORPG area. This story relies a lot on game mechanics to fill the word count and if I were to compare it to something, the closest will be MMORPG: Elementalist. Both are boring to read and the plots are slow to progress.Way too much exposition in these 10 chapters. From a story crafting perspective, it's like using 10 chapters in the place of 1st page of Hunger Games. That is to say the pacing and world building for this story is inept.
Very similar to The Legendary Mechanic. Same Virtual Reality concept with more or less similar protagonists. More Chinese humor that doesn't make sense. Pretty solid character development. Story has hinted towards progressing towards space.
One of the greatest disappointments I've ever read. It's a full-on self insert power fantasy with no unique aspects. The MC is boring and all he does is drink. The author seems to have a rule where they can't have the MC interact with another human without them mentioning how handsome he is and how he has the air of an immortal. The story seemed to me like it was going to be a commentary on cultivation stories, but he ends up falling into generic cultivation cliches (arrogant young masters, face slapping, every woman falls for him, etc.) and even has a little "loli" spiritual herb (only a pedophile refers to ACTUAL CHILDREN as lolis, by the way. Even calling an old woman that looks young a loli is pushing it, but the spiritual herb is literally a child.) The story is non existent - the MC just sits there an drinks and only does anything (by anything, I mean waves his hand and kills everybody instantly) when somebody annoys him. The characters are annoying -. The sect master in particular is really annoying all the time and has to be constantly bailed out by the MC when he does something stupid. 2 stars for world building, since we at least get a general layout of the novel by about chapter 95. The only saving grace of the story is that the grammar is top quality, and the author is probably a native English speaker with how few grammatical mistakes I ever spotted. Past chapter 40, I was already kind of on the edge the whole time I was reading, but I had to stop reading the moment he gets a palm-sized child companion that he refers to as a loli. rant over.
