an ifunny retard can write a story?!?!? great!!ur still a retard thoughaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
it's interesting but I might likely die from cringe soon and it has a bit of grammatical errors, it's manageable though ....................
I'm Happy,No Very Happy with this novel it has evil mc but with emotion like one time he is normal with villagers and another time he is pure evil and i like the way relationship between meena nd mc is going it's just there is not enough chapter and when author break fourth wall it's spine chillin with story and my fav character our one and only rat grifter but ut has so much potential i hope you utilise to maximum author.and if you like mystry suspense and plot twist with human broken behaviour and mc is like joker but with more emotions he expects from life much more in novel but at the end of day entertainment is best for me(evil smirk)
I really liked this story at the beginning but now I am not so sure. The concept is good as it diverges from the typical xianxia plotline/tropes. The only problem is the harem as I think that the story would be far better without it. I am looking forward to how it develops further down.
I just wanna say:
This novel would have been very exciting and pleasant to read if only it focused more on action, adventure, and character development but, oh well, we all have our preferences. If I was younger like 14-17 years old, I think I would, from time to time, like some of the cringe humor in this book.
What I like about this book:
1. The translation is pretty smooth.
2. The premise of the story is something to look forward to though not the first of its kind
What I don't like in this book:
1. Some translated words are out of context. (Remember, this is a fantasy world and our MC(Jiang Xiao)25yrs old, Transmigrated to the body of Jiang Xiaopi 16yrs old. You'll get what I mean if you decide to read the novel.
2. The story is too slow
3. The forced humor between the interaction of the MC and his older sister is at first fun, then ok, then uninteresting, to being unbearable. Imagine having a wincest and Yuri vibe from beginning til chapter 60. Even during combat, instead of more movements and combat tactics, you'll encounter more dry cheese moments.
4. The MC feels like not an MC but a side character. Even Xia Yan and his sister feels more important as I read the novel
5. MC's character is passive. More like a yes man to me. I can't feel his drive and crave for power at all
6. The novel has no depth and goal.
Read at your own risk.
fucking trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sounded cool but as your typical chinese martial arts novel its pretty meh with it coming up with **** as it goes along, I'm also pretty sick of the basic ass **** names along with boring tropes and the way they talk
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This is a good take on a dark/ghost/spirit dungeon novel. I like it because it takes a nice take on necromancy as well the core is kind to everyone.
Great start to the novel, I can't wait to read more.
Loving what you did with this story so far, even brought Jack along. You're like Gene Roddenberry who used Dylan Hunt over and over again. So Cute. The characters are likable, unique, and varied in racial class.
An Undead, A Moon Elf, a High Human and a Seraphim. What else could you possibly ask for!? Keep it up Author-sama! You have our support!
This is an amazing original from this amazing author. He will be going places he is my favorite author. So far all the books I've read from this author are fuchkin pheonomanal. I hope to see more, I will hunt you if you drop any of these masterpieces. I would give money to support you I'm sure other others would too. Maybe think about setting something up.