The work speaks of its efforts. You really did great. I love synopsis and plot. The characters and the backgroung are really hooking me. Hope it would be a mass hit in the future
I can't stop thinking about your book, to the point where it's keeping me hooked all day and night, and i am so excited on what will happen next??
I wish i could write like you!?
It's a pretty good novel with an interesting plot. I would really recommend reading this novel and by the way does anyone know the raw of this novel???
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Hello author and readers.
This is my first review of a novel ever, sooo. Anyways, Character Design: I have to say that the way the author designed the characters and their personalities is great. Sometimes it felt a little bit cliche, maybe? But that might just be me.
World Background: As this is a novel with many worlds, galaxies, universities, I believe the author requires a vast imagination and the capability to design the worlds. So far I enjoyed the world background.
Story development: Honestly when I read the description and the name of the novel, I thought that the story development wouldn't be much to look at, and wouldn't be interesting at all. As the protagonist is an overpowered entity, I'm sure the story development is difficult to work with for the author. Anyways, when I got into reading, I was truly surprised as I really didn't expect the story to develop so well and would just get boring.. but oh boy was I mistaken lol. I never know what to expect of the protagonist, making it interesting. The story develops very well, and does not bore the reader, at least not me.
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Good job, Lord Flash, continue writing. You deserve much more audience haha. I'm sure to stick around until the end of the novel.
One of the most believable VR world's I have seen written. NPC's and world backgrounds actually feel like they are real and the MC isn't OP beyond reason.
Also this novel really makes you feel like your part of an adventure. Fight scenes are exciting but not overly flashy (especially given that he is still lower level) and have room to grow once more powerful abilities/spells are discovered.
Overall, I would highly recommend it to anyone, even people who don't normally enjoy this genre might like it.
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Earlier in the novel the character was only around the boy and story was unclear how ever if a person reads from the very 1st chapter to 39th I guess , huge development in both the writer grammar , delivery, story and the novel , if it goes as it is now , pls help it , if helped it can be a great great great manga
5 star just because it about vtuber
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author I know you started uploading new chapter but please make it fast. i request you as a honest reader
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