This book is worth a read. Although the grammar isn't the best and in some cases the choice of words are quite bad. But it isn't that bad that it disrupts the flow of the novel. Giving the author a 5 star to encourage him
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
read 40s chap , i like this kind of novel, in some area its become repetitive story thats whats the slow paced novel problem is, i like the mc act like a normal people , easy to read, im bored of those arogant novel, so this one is fresh novel for me , i will read some more-
This book looked promising. I like the element in which the novel protray. It's not food per say and it's not too bad. the grammar need to be improved a little.
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
The Gamer , but the chinese little brother of it?Let's see how much is copied in comparsion.
An undercover girlfriend? I hope it doesn't end up with MC killing her like most similar summaries!!
Haven’t read it yet, but I’m inferring from the title and synopsis, that someone got their hands on the crabby patty secret formula and this is the account of that
It's not bad but after 130 chapters we still don't know why the title include "necromancer" I suppose it's his future class but author spoiled it too early.
The story starts off very well and progresses with fluid high points, but as soon as chapter 41 starts grammatical errors constantly appear. The biggest problem is the he/she description where a grandma is a he or the main character referenced as male from the beginning starts being referred to as she. Before publishing any writen literature get someone to proof read. If I knew how bad the book would turn out never would have spent the time to read.
I have read upto chapter 43 and I can confidently rate this high in most aspects except for world building. Specifically the cultivation aspect of it. Since the cultivation aspect wasn't built step by step but rather in an info dumping manner, I am as of now still unclear of what his entire plan is doing. If the cultivation knowledge was built up in a more reader friendly manner, I would've rated it higher. The story development is excellent so far and the world building is phenomenal as well. I only have a complaint about the cultivation aspect of it. Another thing I believe the author can work on is the descriptive aspect. Increasing your vocabulary and designing scenes that seem to literally suck the readers attention can do your story wonders.
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