ive got to say this is an amazing novel . i come across new novels quite frequently and not alot of them are good enough to make me continue to read. this is a great novel very unique . apart from a couple typos here and there the writung quality is magnificent. story development is ata good pace not too slow but not too fast either . character design is quite good my fav characters are du chan,xie mengyu and kim senior , hope you continue to update this story frequently it has massive potential and is already good anyway and the world background is definetly very interesting and well done
One of the coolest Xianxia novels I've read. It's much better the prequel Martial World. The translation is also excellent!!
couldn't go beyond 30 ch..the world building is nonexistent..the characters are so bland..no background whatsoever..things happens very fast..martial arts or better call it martial punch..the mc have such regenerative cells yet cant cure his body..went in a mission to protect the bai family..successfully done yet nobody seems to notice the death of one of the sisters..number one if the so called academy which we dont know anything about..overall a lightning speed pace that ruin the story..
Hidden gem, only ending was too fast placed
somehow i dont feel the anti hero vibes on mc. i feel the villain vibes more on the heroes. it feels contradictory tbh. it was nice though but it was a let down that such old man died and mc has no reaction. technically the old man was the first person that made the mc feel warm at least he has been kind. i was expecting more when it says anti hero tag but so be it. 3.4 for now. reason? the writing is average but still better than any novel (4)story development (i really cant feel thr villain vibes although mc is smart) (3)character design (technically, each of their character development is good but not better because mc was quite naive. he easily trust too much despite being bullied all his life (trust me, I'm a victim of bullying and i know pretty much their mindset. they wont trust too much) updating stability is better, good job! (4) as for world background, you did not state what their world was in. why is their heroes and villain and how such powers came to be so it lacks info. btw some of your plots are forced upon mc so it adds up to the rating.
Great cover! it instantly hooked me for the story. And so far writing quality is very good!as for what should be improved. the synopsis... its a mess. I'm my opinion you should properly arrange it. Also after reading some chapters I noticed some of your sentences were too long. don't be afraid to go on to the next line. Also am very doubtful about your chapter names(perhaps make them a bit shorter?)
I have been waiting forever for somebody to pick this up I hope this continues to get translated because from what I read rhe last time this tory seems really good. I know that this is really long like last timme I checked it had over 10000 raw chapters but please start this again.
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It's a condensation of the worst things you can find on a Chinese novel,the only good point is : no racism seen at the first chapters.But most of the Chinese Authors make racism at the middle of theirs story so you read theirs story for nothing because it's not little racism but something you can't stand.Bye and good reading (lol)
It's a good book so far I enjoy it keep up the good work author.
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idk why this book has only 350k views. it has very very intruiging story. original protagonish who is self aware but not reincarnated or anything. and the world background is historical. i would request the author to give some free reading event and promote his work. 5 star no questions asked.