This book do have story about jesus there are many stories behind it even when we can't see jesus but he is always there for us jesus is the most important person in everything
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I was only able to get through the third chapter before quitting this novel. The writing is so bad. Practically every paragraph has something grammatically wrong with it. Hopefully it gets better, but I won't be wasting my time waiting to find out.
Chapter 10 currently. It seams that the author has rewriten older chapters and latest is done 3 days ago. If it had more chapters and faster publishing I would recomend it fully. As of now I will still say that start of this book is very interesting and as it seems that its not droped you could put it into your libary.The game world here is quit original I hope there will be lot of chapters coming soon.
Storylines is good, plot is good, english translation is good and basically the novel is good so far. 5 Star to support you! Hope you won't drop it and if you do want to drop it, at least drop it when novel at least 100+ chapters. I'm supporting you! Don't give up!
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I like to read web novels on my phone in my spare time. There are a lot of good authors and good books. I’m only on here to read for pleasure. If you don’t want your readers to be able to read your writing... then don’t write AT ALL! I’m honestly curious, what’s the point of doing this?
I was thoroughly intrigued by this novel. What started from just reading a chapter or two lead me to read 13 chapters. Everything is good, the story, the words the author uses to convey his thoughts and the general concept. There were a few mistakes here and there but I believe that the author can improve himself as he seems to value the opinion of his readers. I will be waiting for new chapters of this great novel
This story had such a theme that I saw it being one of the best Warframe novels but because of no updates or rather the extreme slowness of updating makes it hard to even rate it highly since he’s in marvel there’s so much room for creativity and plot holes and cheats since it’s marvel and is normal.
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I have greatly enjoyed reading this novel, it is very enjoyable as I initially thought I was reading one thing, but it turned out to be something else instead. A very welcome surprise.
Story starts off great, but...I came and saw the tags, such as #harem.I can say from the start when I started reading till chapter 17 that it should focus more on the MC because some readers just want to know on how the harem would usually start until it really becomes a 'harem'. This strange thought came to my mind that the male side characters were the harem of the MC, because the early chapters already started simultaneously detailing and focusing on the MC and the Side characters.Introduction of side characters came out quicker than what I thought, you could've just started slow with one. Other side characters at the start doesn't really give that much support in the start story of the MC.The story hooked me but stopped me from reading when the 2 male side characters started showing up, what is this? is this drama where a love triangle starts then goes to pentagon then octagon, so on...I just skimmed and scanned and was too lazy to actually read because wherever I stop and try to actually read, it starts in a place where the side character shows up.This gives vibes of Western and Eastern novel mixed together, that it makes me irritated when I think the about the negative points of both types of novel in one novel.I would like to continue reading, but giving this review, it's time for me to move on and go to other novels.- Still rooting for improvement ? -