I loved this book so much it was a great story keep up the great writing ❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ thank you.
Good book..I am stucked
The book's name and covered held me captivated making me forced to read this book and I am not regretting it at all. Loving it.
It's an interesting story, another great read.
I love this book. It's an easy read, but keeps your attention at the same time. Can't wait for an update.
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Must read!
it's a nice book . give it a chance.
even though your book is very good very interesting oh, I've had problems with other books being incomplete 4 weeks in months . So I hope this is not one of them . if it is at all possible give an idea of when your next chapters will be updated . I have deleted a couple of apps because of the wait
It's always fun to see a flawed character gets the spotlight & readers would get to see their development. Very well written & easy to understand.
The transition between POVs in the 1st chapter could be done better, I think.
Would love to read more!
Grammer and pronouns are all jumbled and makes it hard to understand if he / she who is thinking etc. interesting story just hard to follow with the Grammer and constant pronoun flip flops/ switches
The MC is just an incel. All other characters, including the "Protagonist" and the female lead, are nothing more than one-dimensional figures with no depth or personality.
Every female character starts with a promising personality, but once the MC arrives, they become nothing more than stereotypical, brain-dead females, reminiscent of the worst Japanese dating games.
This story feels like an incel indulging in fantasies, staring at a screen while watching a typical e-girl streamer, masturbating and daydreaming about being the center of the universe, with a rich but unrealistic background that only serves to feed their narcissism.