This story has a good plot! I also like the setup of the characters. It's going to be a great story, I'm so sure of this? though I haven't read up to ten chapters yet ? Keep it up author ?
interesting background. dialogue could use some work. Characters are too innocent. Showing mercy once is fine, the second time they shouldn't leave unscathed.
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. ❤❤Keep writing, Author.
the story is boring, the conflict in the story is too boring, the story is only about mc who collects girls to be strong, the relationship between mc and girls is also not interesting
Author Mary! it's me, from Wattpad. I'm one of your first readers. I want you to know that while it hurts that you deleted your book on Wattpad, I will always be supportive of your works. thank you for letting me know that you renamed the book and placed it here, and thank you for writing a Book 2!
Dear Author, you had an intriguing concept for the story! The plot is interesting. I like the interactions between Matt and Ashton. I wonder who is a kid and who is an adult there...
Well done!
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rly hope that this will be pickedlove the mcso far he seems to be normal, which is way better than most braindead mcs nowadays it looks that this is going to be sweet romance between FL and mcwhat else would you want?go read this
it says completed but the last chap doesnt look like a final chap name, dropped?
plot twist Very cool . interesting story. I just read a story from Pakistan. the line is not market. different from other stories. passion for work✌️✌️
Pretty good story and read. I can't wait to explore more of this stories world
The writing quality is okay but I’m dropping it. I got to around chapter 30 and the every freaking character s-s-stutters and it’s freaking annoying me. People can be surprised or scared or have pretty much any negative emotion without stuttering. It’s okay if one of the characters has a habit of stuttering, it can even be an obvious sign of character development when he develops more confidence but the excessive amount of stuttering by multiple characters, both the typically confident and unconfident, up to this point is a huge turn off.