The main character (MC) initially aims to be a mysterious figure, safeguarding his loved ones with hidden truths. Sounds intriguing, right? However, it turns out the MC is an extreme pushover for the female characters. His excessive efforts for them are exposed in a cringe-worthy manner by Chapter 16, when the protagonist, asleep, has her mind invade his, revealing all his secrets. The narrative becomes derailed by the author's unsavory obsession, seeking instant gratification from the dark hero trope.
Instead of a captivating tale of secrecy, the author opts for an easy route, turning the story into a clichéd misunderstanding plot. What's worse, the story lacks humor, focusing on the MC's heavy-handed desire to bear the world's burdens without the accompanying drama. Since the heroines will inevitably uncover his secret, the system's supposed punishments hold no weight, as no real consequences seem likely.
Adding to the disappointment, the MC has a system that meteors out punishments – a recipe for disaster in system fiction. Who wants to read a character whose actions are completely controlled? Not me.
This is an abysmal read. It baffles me how it garners such high ratings. People have questionable taste. At the very least, they could pick a generic cliche novel that offers better climaxes.
Rating: 1.5/5
This is an intriguing narrative. An indeterminate number of players suddenly find themselves in the virtual world they once inhabited as their avatars. The protagonist, who utilized an item to transform their avatar into their idealized female form – a creative storytelling device – embarks on this journey. The story features several unexpected twists, thought-provoking perspectives, and well-developed explanations that address these events.
One notable aspect is the character's shift in perception towards non-playable characters (NPCs) following the 'Isekai' experience. Although the author doesn't delve into a deep analysis, the change in the MC's feelings and decision-making process is skillfully portrayed.
The plot, although progressing steadily, primarily focuses on the MC's exploration of this new reality, the contrasts with the game, and the diverse adventures, both big and small, that unfold. It's a tale of self-discovery and adaptation within a captivating alternate universe.
Reverse Harems are just cringe, just imagine being the love interest of a female protagonist and accepting other men doing her. Other than the cringeness of this itself is the fact that in the end, they accept it somehow and throw an (The O word :D) and the story will end happily.
But the author of this story took it to the next level and even made it so that the female protagonist has a child! DAFAQ?!
The novel is one of the most interesting slice-of-life novels that I have read, it is even more impressive knowing that it was written by a little monkey named π...
Jokes aside this would do very well if it was adapted as an anime...
A good read to pass time 10/10 will recommend.
BITCH THESE HINTS ARE KILLING ME JUST TELL ME WHAT THE HELL ML DID TO BABY TONG TONG ????
A story with high potential. Can this novel repeat the masterpiece of The Psychopath's Harem؟......................................................................................
Rate this story freely!
i am thinking this as the cover page please rate it
i got an idea and i wanted to share It with you, when we get more ahead with the story, by that i mean many hundreds if the story Is short, or thousands if the story Is long, would you add the universe to the story? for example various races (ex. elfs, dragons,ecc.) or even unique races that don't exist already and each has their own Power system, talents, maybe higher and lower races that have vast difference in innate strenght, (like the difference between a dragon and a wyvern for example), maybe even galaxies, gods that reign those galaxies and dimensions ( for example First to 4th dimension), humans reside in the First, second dimension other races live, and the same with the 3rd and 4th, in each dimension time flows differently, and the Door trails are bringing people in those other dimensions, i know It sounds like a Grand but stupid idea, but i believe if you Plan everything carefully, the story would become many times Better than It already Is. Hope this idea of mine can help you.?
ps. i Just realised i wrote 1k words, Sorry about that lol
At first I thought this story was interesting and well written... as time went on there were more and more holes in the story. Random things would happen with no reason, and characters would do things randomly out of their character. The story makes no sense anymore. I’m on chapter 70 and I’ve already given up on following up with the story. There are also a few translation errors, but the story is updated fast!
it's really annoying when the mc's thoughts and the mc's statements both use the " " because you only realize too late that they are thoughts instead of statements. that means if his thoughts occur between conversations it completely destroys the mood and flow. it's better just when it go for
statements= " "
thoughts = ' '
After giving it a second try, I don't hate this novel anymore
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It is a light, sometimes dark novel with comedy all over the places which sometimes hits and misses
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Currently at ch 737
Overall: 7/10
Well, a lot of stacking up to do with SS, TBATE and others. It seems like a fine cultivation novel witha usual trope.