The scenes were very interesting and I am eagerly waiting for the next episodes, ,.......... was there really ghost. who was that girl asked for lift?
Overall, story isn't bad. Plot seems believable, but some parts are kind of rushed. Please get a good editor and fix all those grammar mistakes - don't just use google translate or thesaurus. Also, don't drag out and mansplain too much.
I think this is going to be a fun book. I have enjoyed the descriptions of the character And her environment. I could feel her frustrations and the emotions that she didn't quite know what to do with. I found it easy to put myself in her shoes. I'm definitely looking foreword to reading more. ?
I like this story but I wish we could see quicker fight scenes or longer chapters dedicated to them but overall great story. With lots of room for development.
this is a serious review, this book is amazing m’gentlemen. the writing? amazing. the world building? simply epic. the mystery of this? so cool
A worthy book by all standards. Grammar is incredible. Action scenes, out of this world. Character design is great. World background, acceptable and the story development is just on point. No info. Dumps too. I doubt there will be a critic here on the review page. There's just no fault.
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if you're expecting this novel to be good then you'll be disappointed, mc has a low IQ and trashy reasoning.Like I know he has extraction system, but that doesn't mean he don't need to cultivate, come on he spend two years on the first chapters like for nothing, he didn't even train his weapon skills much less cultivate, its just like he is living mortal life.
Repetitivo de mais, ele passou 15 capítulos na mesma coisa, uma coisa horrível de ser ler, não sei como aguentei tanto tempo, é a pior história que já li.
excited to see where this story goes! please keep up the good work .
I liked this web novel and the original is one of my favourites, however, for some reason the author stopped updating the story, hopefully he's not dead or anything
MC killed 1800 skellys in 1 hour, that's like 1 skelly per 2 seconds... holy cow imagine 2000 skeletons on top of each other and he also has to thrust 1800 times nonstop as a ordinary student even extreme athlete couldn't handle that.MC gets OP skill, that's normal...But WTF is with only 3 min cooldown!!!!Now only 15 chapters in he has 700 stats for all attributes and he gets, WTF is with this over the top stats? Do the Chinese have something to compensate for that they need insane high numbers at a low level?All side characters are literal retards, instead of confronting the low level mobs with a little intelligence they rush brain dead into their weapons...The MC summons 3 creatures which has a extreme showy effect that the whole city could see. 1 summons seems like no one gives a ****, 2 summon some low life see it and thinks its a treasure, 3 summon some other low lifes seem to see the extreme city wide effect and they are astounded and think that's a treasure. OK so didn't they see the 2 other summonings? SRSLY this novel is so over the top ridiculous it's destroying my braincells, if this is what the Chinese like, no wonder 90% of them are retards.