Neklaus
Será que a nossa waifu já está decididaTomara que venha uma loli dragão, mas acho meio difícil já que é uma novel coreana e não japonesa
Also that's where they the translation from
you’re literally everywhere
I am doing this for the event i didn’t even read the book
I just wanna add that don't, in the name of the World Tree, don't ever turn him into a human. You can give him humaniod properties and everything, but if MC suddenly becomes human later on, the story loses its uniqueness. And it's like every other system novel.
I really loved this book but the ending was not satisfying at all. I absolutely HATE how it ended. You left no room for redemption at all. I am devastated how it ended. I kept holding out hope for real forgiveness and a chance for him to redeem himself but I was so let down I want to cry.
This story was great but a bit confusing as midway through the chapter count the author changes characters. Is this intentional or a mistake?This totally detracts the reader from the story as it breaks continuity.
I don't have much to say. I only ask that you try to read the first 15 to 20 chapters. The beginning is more of an introduction to the character, characteristics, and motivations.These chapters are definitely not to be skipped, but the novel's plot starts to develop after these first chapters.I plan to release 2 chapters a day most of the time, but one day or another I may only release 1.That's it. If you have any questions, ask directly in the chapters. (Sometimes, I won't see your comment here.)I will develop the auxiliary chapter little by little, so it won't be so empty forever.
I read till chapter 127ish and in my opinion this is the best fanfic of naruto I've read so far. The MC has no cheats, but trains like there's no tomorrow and is cautious, which I think is another good point of this novel. It worth noting that he is an anti-hero type. He is no psychopath/sociopath/evil and he is also no saint/hero/happy-go-lucky type person(which in my opinion is very good, as I'm sick tired of reading about those.)This novel is for those that like or at least can manage training arcs. There is a lot of it, especially in the beginning when he is in the academy. Make no mistake though, the novel NEVER got boring! The training arcs were actually my favorite arcs so far. In fact, for me, the fact that the MC depends on himself for power-ups(at least as far as I have read) instead of seeking external sources of strenght(like a zero-tails, for example), or random lucky encounters, is something I enjoy very much.There is no sudden power-ups, or cheats. There is a little bit of comedy, especially in the interactions with Hiruzen, but just a little. This novel also explore the possibilities of wind style ninjutsus, beyond what the likes of temari, or even danzo, could ever hope to show in canon. Most importantly, at least as far as I could tell, there was no logical jumps anywhere. It's all very neat and creative, without making the reader feel alienated or flabbergasted in anyway. (Just the fact that there is no system granting him haki, or random space-type powers or whatever powers that do not fit at all in the universe is already fantastic to be honest...it's also why I started disliking fanfics with systems.)Oh and the pace so far is very good as well, at least for people like me that enjoy long stories with lots of adventures/training... though the adventure part happens later in the novel. Still, its awesome. It's a bit like a slice of life type novel, but faster and with a few time skips. I certainly enjoyed the pace very much.Btw, about stability of updates, I have no clue. I'm the type of reader that waits for hundreds of chapters to be released before I start reading a story. So yea. OH, and there was no romance in the novel so far. In summary, hopefully this novel will be 1k chapters long!
loving it ?????????????. hope the author continues to write to the end???......................,..............................
my second review, I didn't like it at the start but the author got better as the book moved forward so I think it's ok......................
Always been eagerly waiting for the new novels by this author.? I must say your unique titles and characters never fail to captivate me.❤️ Inspired by ur works dear Author?I Read only a few chapters but couldn't stop myself to leave a review. I am wondering if I should leave a spoiler but don't want spoil the fun lol ? A must read novel,,,, U like sci-fic Then what r u waiting for? add this book to ur library n start reading? Lots of love to the author!!?
