Good premise but bad execution.... Racism shtz starts after trial read and so I already invested myself into it before the novel shows it's real colors... Also the story got is fast but the mc is slow as snail...
Actually a pretty good novel so far. It may not be on the level as vampire progenitor since it hasn’t rly intoduced major side characters yet
Great book! The pacing is really good, and the MC here is an accurate representation of the types of relationships Cyclxne experiences in his school :DDDD
Good book. MC seems pretty reasonable and makes consistent decisions. The world seems pretty interesting too. MC is OP, but holds himself back from taking full advantage of it due to his hoarder tendencies.
Cool going to go for it as always needed to run through all the plot to decide the run so hope it's a good run all the way..by the way thanks..
The story has a large, colourful cast of characters, with universal themes at play, all set in an interesting world. There's little fluff which lets you jump straight into the story. It's also well written.
If I'm being critical, there are dry exposition dumps that could be integrated more organically into the story through dialogue and descriptions. There was no need to give a date and tell us about the state of the moon as if it were a fact. A character could check a calendar or the time. A bunch of characters could simply be staring outside and have said outside described. My point is that there are better ways to communicate ideas that aren't straight up exposition dumps.
Pretty cool Novel
has potential
I'm sure more exciting scenes await us as we progress.
I believe it will attract more readers as time goes on.
I also hope she has a strong partner that supports the lead character,
Hate-harem, I hope no harem
Good luck
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A good story that has quite a depth to it. With what's currently happening, this is something many can relate to. Good writing style, clear. The author knows how to describe situations.
A little warning, first coupl of chapters are extra long, but don't drop it because the story is great.
Kudos to the author. Keep it up!
I dropped it at Chapter 27 so here's a summary of this novel in 27 chapters.
So basically the mc returned from the future (100 years) where humanity almost or went extinct. He is raised in an organisation that deals in assassination. Oh, did I forgot that something called Heavenly-winged cicada (whatever) went with him back in time? No? Now you know.
It raise his perception - also, he is rediculous handsome. Oh, you don't care? neither do I but it's mentioned a lot of times in this novel. So I thought might aswell tell you.
Uhmm... There are items called miracle items that basically is fantasy level items with amazing effects and consequences like the (small spoiler and also the fact I dropped this novel) heavenly (something) dragon eye. It give him the ability of sight and other things that I don't remember.
So the consequences are the bloodline heritage and that basically makes him constantly having the urge to mate and spread his genes. But here's the catch. he travels with his good friend (female) who obediently follows his orders and trust him completely.
So yes, he didn't r*pe her anything like that, just that he chose other women to have s*x with so I don't know, didn't like that. It's pretty obvious that his friend will become the FL so when he chose someone else to have s*x with, it didn't really sit well with me because sometimes (mostly/frequently) that means it will become a harem. And I hate harems to the core.
And yeah, the novel is cool unless you're like me who hate what I just mentioned.
Translation - 5* (you can read smoothly)
SoU - 5* (trial read, always 5 stars)
Story Development - 1* (I just hate his choice, it's original 4 star)
Character Design - 3* (Just because the mc has an unique side effect it makes a little bit better but like anything else he is extremely handsome (cliche) and his friend is extremely cold like all the other extreme beauties)
World background - 4* (I don't know with 40 chapters but I guess it's quite explained, I'll just give it a 4 star)
The premise of the story is interesting but the actual coolness of the codes system is lost due to the lack of codes and their usage. There are a ton of errors and some of the chapters are actually in the wrong order. The character has the potential to be great and this story amazing, but it seems like the author can’t stay on track with the characters goals.