I hope this story continues some day
people complain about a simple ntr being that it happens in reality
there are much worse stories in this respect
when the protagonist takes his journey to power he must step on the corpse of his enemies to conquer him but it is not always just that ...
he must also deal with the loss of loved ones to overcome terrible emotional traumas in order to not only gain his power but also the mental stability necessary to wield it
for it is the weaknesses that shape its character and firm its conviction to move forward, not success.
if this story embodies all of this correctly it is a great novel.
I would recommend author of this story attemtp writing this story again after growing up a little bit, cause it really looks like kid writing doctors degree philosophy research after reading one from internet. The mc has no logic in his actions. I would expect some expert style moveset from mc that can play around with police by refueling his bike on high speed and shooting down a copter easily but then he acts like 8 year old moron (kids act more logical than this mc). Out of logic parts is about whom adress his hatred, not understanding the "will", the essence and magic stuff, even blue burger, if his ancestors was from earth and u don't get blue bread from earth's wheat. U could just find tons of out of logic parts in every chapter
The plot was refreshing as the concept is kind of new. Many opportunities to explore. The story does have potential.
Character design is also okay.
The only downside I found is that there very noticeable grammatical and writing errors. Not the worse I've seen but still a sore thumb.
Overall with editing and proofreading this can immensely improved.
Consider getting help in editing or try using tools and software on this area.
It is highly recommended its plot is quite interesting. It really have a nice rythym in it. Kindly upload its new chap as soon as possible cause I can't wait for it
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A well-crafted world, with a promising yet not invulnerable character. The cultivation system is gradual and not overpowered, and am loving to see where this story goes!
Not even 100 chapters in Raws and I am already vomiting blood. I get that the Author may be a new writer (If I read machine translation correctly) But dang story-wise it's bad. I grit my teeth when he joined the 'adventure guild' . It's going further away from being 'merchant'. Just full of cliches
To be honest, let me tell you something it's shit. It's horrible, the story itself has no plot it's about some cliche revenge shit and it's repeating the same shit all over again until the author fucking dies because of his stupid long running manhua with no chracter background and story. To be honest with you all, why haven't the author made a character with a story that we could relate them like a tragic villain and hero or at least that makes the story sense. But this shit is a fucking joke zero out ten for me.
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honestly, I like the summary and I think this will be fun but when I see one of the tag is "acting weak", I think, I pass. I am so tired with MC that always hiding power just for the author display the MC not so OP to the reader while the truth the MC is already so OP and can deal with the current trouble. So yeah, I pass this time...
Why is it that webnovel still gives us these random crap books that are just copy-pasted of a different book but done worse. Please webnovel stop only putting random trash into the site, the good boy social credit points must be worth it.