a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes
I don't know why but I'm really excited to see the upcoming chapters. Just reading the synopsis catchesd my interest. This kind of novel is what I'm vouching to read all day long!
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Okay i liked the descriptive state of the book..it is well fleshed out, i enjoyed the first chapter..that really caught my attention.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
pretty good so far wonder when the author's going to be back to finish writing the book
a fast food type novel .. no real thought as of yet .. but good translation ... and no obvious plotholes except his old herb to new herb bridge . which can be glossed over by the panel ... but its readable ... no obvious brain fade movements ... hope it picks up as the mc is gearing to be op among op's
this novel is just amazing. storyline, world building, characters everything. just one thing apart from the language problem is the MC's stats sheet. it's no longer consistent and confusing. I'm already lost because the rewards and stats after the rewards don't match especially towards the later parts
I have never seen an author suck his mc so much, each gesture, each movement, each breath,the author adds how majestic are mc, how shocking it is, how extraordinary it is, that everything becomes illegible, with each gesture in a fight, the author adds 2/3 paragraphs of sucking from mc, he launches an attack?boom 3 paragraph of sucking from mc, a dodge? boom 3 mc sucking paragraph.it's just unreadable.
Pretty interesting and a fun read overall. Author occasionally breaks the fourth wall. MC has an OP cheat and uses it to make money. Thankfully doesn't seem like there's going to be a harem, not sure if there's a romance tag at all actually.