Hello dear readers,I wanted to write a comment after 3 years to update y'all on things that have happened and why I decided to stop progressing with this novel.When I started this novel I was going into high school and wanted to do this as a side project to hopefully earn money (which didn't work out). By the time I got to around 30 chapters in I was losing interest in being an author because I had found a group of friends and most of my time was spent playing games and going through school. While I have graduated high school; I don't believe that I will have the free time with the upcoming semester of college. Maybe one day I will pick it back up and be able to write a grand story for you dear readers, but I'll be going through rigorous classes at college while I pursue a Bachelors in Computer Science and won't have time since I'll be preoccupied with studying and the gym.I'm sorry to have let y'all down and hopefully can understand my situation. I appreciate the kind comments on some chapters that I've received over the years and I hope that y'all go on to do some amazing things. Just remember to keep your head up and follow your heart.With love, "Devouring Immortal's" Author.
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I read the beginning and I really like the story so far. I also like the world building and its mystery! looking forward to reading more!
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i loved the wording of the story. i loved the mix of suspense and romance. i had to wait til the end of the book to give a good review. this is a book to just kick jack anf have fun with.
This story is awful. What's worse the tags are wrong.The protagonist is a complete White-Knight (righteous hypocrite) character who 'righteously' expands his harem. How does he do this? Conveniently the MC will meet Heavenly Beauties, and soon after there'll be great opportunity for him to save them. They of course can't help but swoon - if they aren't falling for him fast enough, his cultivation technique will have him lose control, leading to him r@ping them. The victim becomes a tsundere and realises who her true love is - the MC...If this wasn't enough, this novel has the annoying tendency to 'power-up' the entire harem every time the protagonist's power increases. Artefact (necklace) given to harem member 1 turns out to be a godly artefact and she suddenly becomes tyrannically powerful! How a novel could go so wrong is beyond me. This is a shockingly poor novel.
roses are redviolets are blueI love this novel so will you !!!!!!!it started slowly but as I kept on reading it on w.u.x I fell in love with it, so here I am
This is awesome!The writing quality is great. It was flawless. There were so many lines that could be made as quotes. The way Lorn sees life is on point. I loved where the story began. The story was developed in a way that could attract readers immediately. Since it's a video game-related novel, we can expect a very good world development as the story progress. Also, Lorn is pretty much an attractive character. It was a good read for me. I have already added this to my library and will continue reading to know what will happen to Lorn in the future. Keep up the good work author!I wish you the best of luck!