I don't see how anyone can like this hes too naive it's annoying and he's getting controlled like a little *****. I do this bec gramps says so, I gotta be cute bec this goddess says so, oh he's being annoying let's let the demon god bully him ? not even good and him tryna be cute is not cute at all it's annoying. The system is not even strong at all to if it's letting others control him?
I found the novel interesting, the concept of 3 "supreme gods" in an immature child is absolutely new to me, as I have never seen it in a novel before, its only flaw is that the story is faster than the flash.
the story is great with minor grammatical mistakes,tho it will greatly promote your novel if u can add the tag,i will give more elaborate review after that.
The author here, I just finished a concept art after not drawing for a while and posted it below for you to see. Does anyone have a guess who the person will be?
While the world build is a little hard to fully grasp it can be easily overlooked after focusing on the main character and her hilarious personality and misadventures??
You would think that 4.5 rating and 180 chapter would make a great story, huh? WRONG! Evry chapter doesn't have more than 500 words without the status,skill and quest information.What's more, the status doesn't make any sense.
this one is good book... i read until chapter 20 the translator was good and not just mtl with editing. ????????????????????
this story slaps lol, read 230 chapters in the raw and it did a good job of making each new conflict feel like it had stakes and a real risk of failure/loss
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Try My novel #Rise OF Evil Sword GodIf you like harem novels with a great cast of characters or are searching for a story with a developed plot and a steady flow, you should read this story it's good. Because it's not some 18+ fap material with a storyline as a background. I like that MC is not just running around and raping everyone. He is restricting himself.
You know I've seen a **** ton of anime and hentai but this makes me harder than both. Love the book. Very descriptive and well thought out.
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