To be honest, this novel is now one of my favorite on Qidian (alongside TKA). The style is similar to Trafford's trading club where the customers' stories are a big part of the novel. However, I enjoy Number one dungeon supplier a lot more because the MC actually progresses and the grammar/writing is overall better.I can only find one major problem with this novel: it is currently standing on the 2nd rank of original novels, which is completely undeserved.....it should clearly be 1st place.
The story is alright, there are some grammar mistakes here and there but not to many, not a bad read but isn't an amazing one either. I think with a little more work, and editing it can be a pretty decent read. Keep it up the more you work on this the better you'll Improve. That's all I got to say but this is a pretty ok story, keep up the good work.
Figthing and keep uo the good work author?. Waiting for the new chapters to come. I hope things will get more interesting and more new chapters to come.
The author has taken quite the tried and true genre and has done a wonderful job making it their own. The story is progressing but it doesn’t feel like it is going too fast. There is a good mix between combat, world building, story, and character development. The novel is an easy read and is a nice surprise from a new author
Seems nice, even though I have no idea where you are going, but keep up the good work.By my blade, this web novel restriction shall be cut down.
Please update faster. This is one of the funniest stories I have read it doesn’t matter if your grammar is bad but I just find this novel funny.
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This story has a lot of potential to become a famous fanfic and I hope this story does not dropped?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I love the concept of the story, however, it has an awfully large amount of similarity with Jay Aslan.
Good story waiting for more chapters and the suspenses in every chapter are awesome....all the best for your next chapters by the way your narration is also good
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