I think it was a really good story . .
I think the chars are fun so far, and the writing is believable and neat! I'm not nearly caught up but this book has been a breath of fresh air recently!
Nothing really changes from the cannon except the mc is kage level already and copy jutsu but not gonna use them. The mc power is getting stronger each day but not plan to use them to keep the timeline the same. So yeah, it felt like reading or watching the cannon story.
I want this to be picked please.I want more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters more chapters
So far I think Story is Very likeable. I Like the characters relationship between leo puppatier. All the characters of the FloCk are orginal. OnlY thinG thaT needs tO be added is More workD building.
While this is a good concept and not a bad storyline the writing is not very good, for example there is very little on terms of both character development and backstory. The writing development and how the author tells you about what has happend and how he got the parasite system is a bit crude and dry.This is not meant to be demeaning nor could I do any better, it is just meant to be constructive critasims from your friendly neighbourhood hypocrite.
This novel is about a young man who transmigrated into another young man's body in a world of cultivation the problem comes when he realizes that he has gained the ability to see other people's providence by looking at his own providence he realizes she sucks and he is but is that the limit of your abilities? Read and find out :V
A very good book MC is a little op but doesn't take advantage of it while learning about himself along the way. a good read and easy to enjoy
It is a peaceful novel ... The MC is not ambitious, arrogant, bloodthirsty, or even cold ... He actually a peaceful and easygoing person ... Of course this don't mean he is weak, No he is strong but because he always fight with peoples who is higher than him in cultivation level he appears to be weak ... Anyway The MC lifestyle is considerably less aggressive and he care more about his subordinates and frinds more than his goals ... He don't feel offended over little thnigs and can ignore the ignorant people easily without losing his temper ... [Though his relationship with the ninth prince look like the backstory of novel with MC (or his father) who worked hared with his best friend (the crown prince) and faced everything together and in the end when the best friend ( the crown prince) become the King he becomes paranoid about his best friend (the MC or his father) so he decided to kill him mercilessly just to protect his throne.]For other characters inside the novel .... Will .... They aren't bad but Mr. author don't give them enough exposure they mostly feel secondary characters and even thier development is always behind the scene and we don't even get know how they get stronger or if their any secret they have or what is their opinions on the major decisions of the MC or how is thier daily life is,...etc.The plot of the novel is actually like any other chinese novel when the MC become to strong to his current place he will move to the next station.Lastly, the harem members of this novel ... Until know their only one confirmed (Hu Jia "his legal wife") and one potential wife on the way (Zhou Mei "His business partner") ,and lastly the lesser potential one(Lu Qing Yun "His frist female servant"), The harem here is slow paced because the MC is content with his wife so if those potential harem members don't actively pursue him then he will not even think inappropriately about them. And here I will recommend this novel for those who want less violence and more schemes ... also It's more likeable for anyone who want to pass his free time.
Honestly, i thought it would be the same as the other novels with the same concept (dragon mc), although the mc is op, the pacing doesn't actually always revolve around his pov. We actually get to know the other minor characters which is fantastic. Absolutely love it, author. I wish you luck and i can't wait for the updates! Happy new year!
It is So interesting. I really liked all the characters . The writter has potential. Character development was top notch.Thank you very much
It is both like a parallel universe without rebirth and like a full-fledged separate story. The main thing is not to drop this story! Too interesting!