This novel is amazing I love it. The story line is fun the orc pov is really done well.Plus the plot isn't just forced or just has plot armor! it works the way it's meant to and makes sense, and to be honest that's all you need to get 5 stars from me.Though sometimes the writing quality dips a bit, ik you've said before you plan to do a mass correction thing and tbh they are just a few spelling mistakes here and there so here is the 5 star for writing quality ahead of time!But make sure to correct them all!dont let me down!!!!!!and keep being awesome (also I don't mind the other pov thing but so others don't complain keep it to 2 POVs and clearly write Alex's POV or POV ??? / unknownor something like that, so they don't get confused )thank for reading here's one year's worth of luck you'll need it for 2021
I belive this story is around a 4 out of 5.,Mostly because of the lack of explaining something’s, such as you stated something about humans being enticing, and the mc would feel pain from normal food..But then it was not mentioned again, at least not mentioned to around chapter 60..I’m not sure if it gets mentioned, but I’m assuming not..But either way the story is great but a little slow..
The concept is good, but story is all over the place. The story felt like am empty husk, with no soul. Like somebody is reciting in a monotonous tone. First of all, the game mechanics is shitty. Maybe the issue is with translation, but any info related to stats, equipment, skills, etc doesn't make sense. They are described in a confusing manner and the info doesn't connect. It's honestly frustrating to read. Plus, a lot of situations described here seem unrealistic, even with a novel's standard. Not worthy to be selected. I hope it doesn't.
I read this book a couple of years ago before reading too far into another of this authors works. Just read through it again, as I remembered liking it, and I’m more than happy that I did. Looking forward to the latest installment in this series of stories!
Give me Neko, give me Naruto and Potter style! The beginning is cool, punchy, and delicious. Not much attention is paid to the World Background. Give me more!
love the story. Even though it's short I love the plot and the way the characters are constructed. Would love to read more of the work so will be waiting for updates.
Bad grammar but not to the point of being unreadable. Good ideas for the erotic contents that cover various fetishes, but they're told in a way which is lack in details. As a result, readers can't get immersed enough to fully enjoy it.
Character development, ok. World building ok-ish. Grammar, ok. Druid class, more than ok and not the usual swordsman/mage/assassin. Mad Snail = questionable.
"Hey!"(you'll see this word alot in this story.. so far as i've read.) It's like a bunch of mmo stories came together to donate some seed and made a baby.. which is this story. ^^' some ppl might enjoy this that might not have read alot of mmo stories before? hard to say, gl to author
It was good from start at another world to the chapter where appeared 5 no name maid's in his bed.After that there slave seal that can edit memory and kill with a thought and it become trash story really fast.Can read but story lose all importance.
unless you are more of a degenerate than rudeus grayrat don't read it
Just reading the description makes me sad, because I already lost someone who's dear for me, and I know this story will make me emotional, but I hope for a good HAPPY ending you see, hahaha didn't mean to pressure you dear Author, thanks for sharing this story!