I like the story author keep it up ❤️…..
Really really good cultivation story one of my most favorite, I wonder every chapter what next realm there will be and there is some side stories like skymender arc, while it’s a little long I think the author is just experimenting and it is well written so it doesn’t really affect reading experience, keep up the good work author !
It was interesting Looking forward to where this series goes
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very good the like the main protagonist character he's very cool and the setting description is very interesting its different from other book I've read.
Review time~I only read 3 chapters and this is what I think about it,The story started with brief explanation of the two realm death and life which attracted my attention. and you wrote it very well and I felt as if a anime is palyijg inside my head.Then at second chapter we get to see the ml ( maybe) in modern Era which was a nice choice but....to think that everyone will have power seems good but will 3020 really be like that with gangsters? It feels a bit off...well then again it's fantasy so anything can happen.And as for the main character back story it was sad and realistic which is a plus point ( bf r@ped his sister *sigh* bitter reality of our world) And last but not the least~ Good work author, you are truly hardworking!
nothings new but i like it, sometimes cliche can be good too//////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
In commemoration of reaching 10 chapters, here is my final review of this.It's set up like a personal blog but in novel format.Read it and interact with the author as if this was a blog and you definitely won't complain about it not being a "novel". It's not even a novel idea but a journal is essentially a blog; just more personal and reflective than others.The main character of this story could be just about anyone. In this case, it's the author himself.Through his sharing we readers also come to realize that we are main characters of our own lives. While we may think our lives are boring, they aren't to others.It's a journal-book style blog written by a high school teenager. Writing quality? As I've mentioned before, and will mention again: It's not meant to be a professional story, grammar and spelling mistakes don't need to be perfect, but the author does his best to deliver and his loyal readers devour it all up.This is my final review. Thank you.
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I am a big fan of modern military vs fantasy military. But it’s in short supply these days. So, the premise of this novel is very exciting to me. And the dialouge has that feel of proper military training. When I first read the chapter, I was a little worried about why you would choose Iran. Then I remembered that there are supposed “Stargates” ruins in Iran as well as Iraq. So, it would be the perfect explaination for the transmigration into another world. Keep it up.
Practically no story because it’s just basic summaries of what happened and each chaiter is embarrassingly short that it takes away from reading every single time. Wasn’t worth the time reading
Here is a review by the master => After reading this i think you need to improve your grammer and also vocabulary. There is still room for improvement as i see that you are new to this so you can improve a lot. Good luck. ?