Then smiled and took her hand and walked to there seat huh tadashi Misaki looks at his hand and can feel the grip huh then she looks at him they took a seat next to each other during class all Misaki could think about was tadashis hand around 12:00 they had lunch so as tadashi turned around he seen Misaki get up and run out the class she seen Takeo and yelled out to him heyyyyyy takeo wait up. oh hey Misaki are you ok huh oh yes I'm fine just wanted to say happy birthday oh and here this is for you I made it myself so you better take good care of it she said with a smile. thank you I'll open it after school ok oh and can I talk with you after school he asked yeah sure anything for the birthday boy haha he smiled and said ok meet me on the rooftop of the school. Okay no problem see you later takeo. Yea see you later....Misaki as she walks away takeo goes back to think and in his mind he remembers when they were kids
Tora and Sam walked into the guest room and found Kyouka on the bed hugging a pillow tightly.
He crawled on top of her body before he started kissing her, in her neck, ears, forehead while at the same time preparing to thrust inside her...
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Bishou: Then I just hope that I won't be kidnapped while you're watching the camp for us.
I just hope that author continues with this book. Got lots of potential. Please don't leave Roman behind!!!
"What do you mean? What punishment?" Hyugo asked.
to chapter 1192, i coudn't find more, beacuse from then on chapters are repeating. story is good, Ml is protecting mc, he revenge for her, and using this reason to invite for dinner, their interactions is envious...Mc father has story, but the only thought i have for him is "why he won't dissapear
invisible dragon:OMG!
31 (2002/07/29)
no way how~~~
Plot is good. Characters are good. Build-up is good. What's bad? The dialogue, translator's thesaurus, authors list of phrases and their strange urge to push the MC on to a pedestal no matter the situation. Mainly because of the author, the book tends to go through waves of good and bad every 20 or so. The author keeps on putting in unessesary descriptions of the MC's BEWITCHING smile. Notice the caps? It's there for a reason. I have read 4 straight chapter with atleast one mention of the MC hanging around lazily inside her house and smilingly BEWITCHINGLY. That was the exact word used everytime. E-V-E-R-Y-T-I-M-E. I You would think that this was on the translator, but you'd be wrong. I thought that too when I first read Enchantress Among Alchemists, another one of the author's tled books, but that changed when I read the other books by the author. All the translators are diffeent but this pattren shows up in each book. It's like the author writes amazingly for a period of time then all of a sudden they remeber that they haven't talked about how amazing the MC is for a while so they write a bunch of chapters in a couple of hours, doing their best to build up the MC. Ex: The book started out terrible. The author was completely focused on trying to make the MC look amazing but there wasn't anyone there to be her foil. So what did they do? The made the MC confront her General grandfather. About what? He went to fight wars and when he came back he heard that his granddaughter had tried to kidnapped a handsome man in broad daylight so he asked her what was going on. Didn't hit her. Didn't yell. Just asked. But the MC lost her **** at him, lecturing him that he didn't care for his granddaughter and cared more about what other people told him. Worst of all, to make surebthat the MC looked all smart and astute, and because the grandfather was supposed to be a good guy and the good guy can't go against the MC, he even agreed that she was right!The author does this kind of thing multiple times but in diffrent ways. There's the BEWITCHING smile, the lashout at grandpa, all the times that the characters do a double take when she says something "shocking" (things they've already been told when the author was writing normally, but since there needs to be something to prop the MC up, we'll all just pretend we didn't already hear it once).All of this sucks because the MC is a great character, one of my favourite MC's infact! I hated her with a passion when I started the story but once the author started writing like a nprmal person, she was amazing! Her relationship with her grandfather was adorable and she was awesome with the ML. (Maybe spoiler)Quick note: if you've ever read one of the other books by the author, you know it's coming. The vengeful ***** that just won't die who's in love with the ML. It's in all of the author's books. Other books have them too but these women usually die in a about 200 chaps max at the start, but Vengeful *****™ is in a whole new league. It's been a while since I read so I can't remeber their names but there was the sickly daughter of the sect head who dreamed of the ML so she thought they were destined lovers (Evil Emp Wild Consort) (the author worked hard to push that one through, you'll know when you find out the real reason she dreamt of ML), and there was that girl who transmigrated into the MC's orignal parents rival clan's daughter who followed the main couple through multiple lives (Enchantress among alchemist)(man that is one sticky bitch)