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I don’t know if its just the earlier chapters but the way he talks is not refined for the thousands of lifes he lived and he didnt bother researching cultivation or any so called Immortal things in any of his life times or trying to break the cycle great idea poorly implemented
ok this is going to be as honeat as i can make it. the story and world background is really good. the Mc is dumb there is no getting around that. the bigeat issue for me is the grammer cuz at certin timea it is just barely readable and makes no sence. the names keep changing which i find is a common trope in these kind of chineese novels. alot of diffrent termenology being thrown around that just makes the novel unreadable. i would be fine by the quality if it did not have locked chapters. seriously i do not understand why ppl lock chapters if the novel has this manny grammer issues. this just my opinion you do not have to share it. i came to this conclusion after reading 30 chapyers
A great read, captured my attention from the first chapter and i just couldn’t stop reading This is a wonderful novel that i would recommend to anyone I love the concept of the novel
I think this novel has too much drama I would prefer it to be more stories about football with a little slice of life, but overall it's good novel
Very interesting story. After electricity, you can create the first Ford Model T he rode on ethonol "alcohol". in the history of the United States, the automobile has played the backbone in industrialization. I hope the author takes this into account. If you need to know about the history of the car, then there is a blogger on YouTube (АСАФЬЕВ СТАС)
hey writer did you drop this novelwhy there is no update still
Definitely an interesting novel just from the synopsis alone. Can't wait to see where this novel goes.
A cultivation bigshot replica, let's goooo @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@####################$$$$$$$$$$$$$$&&&&&-----------*****************""""**@@@@@@
Unique story, however, early romance ruins it. Doesn't even have the romance tag. Also don't like childish mcs, when they're actually adults.
It is hard to belive that this has not been translated.
Literally one of the best historic Kingdom building novels on this website.
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