good story plot ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Terrible translation
Inconsistencies
Wrong terminology
That's within les than half of first chapter
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could not get past the translation. "there were factories not used by factories, gyms used as currency" was too much for me to handle. Even cursory editing done by a middle schooler would have been enough to fix the incorrect pronouns, calling a bike a donkey, and other random incomprehensible sentences.
probably one of the best for this trial........................................................................................................
授徒万倍奖励：武道横推诡异
here you go
A bunch of dumb people in a story with out plot development. It is an bad written paper about why the knight class is bad. ...................
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There is only 8 chapters so far. But you get quite some action from Asura, the ruthless unbound protagonist. There is a lot of face-slapping and looming schemes.
There are mages AND martial artists in this world? Is this an Eastern-Western fusion? I am definitely excited for the world to gradually unveil.
The formatting is not perfect. But hey, it doesn't affect the read that much.
Solid story. Keep up the good work!
Pretty interesting story, classic pro vs antagonist story, but that is what makes it good. The translation is quite good and he has fixed any mistakes that have come up! Great Story!
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I finished reading the first 3 chapters. Got to say I like the self-awareness of the MC in the beginning, very easy to follow with the pacing that I think is good on how you pulled it off. A well thought out backstory with said that the MC knows his position and he understands his placement in his old world then suddenly being transported into somewhere he doesn't know is quite surprising for me at least.