Five stars because you are writing something I have been waiting a long time for, an MC who is not human bit a beast. So take all my stones! I will take up all the exp I can get. Thanks.
I'm not a fan of gaming but your book illustrates the settings, thoughts and emotions of the players all too well. It reminds me of The King's Avatar movie. I don't have background knowledge for gaming so reading the first part confuses me at first. But as I read on, it gets better and you depicted it well. Nice job author!
Interesting premise, Promising start. slightly hard to follow after being thrown by the father. Things started feeling random after that. Couldnt make it through volume 2.Main issue is the plot. grammar and writing could be better but that’s not as important. Question for those who have read further: does it get better? Does it return to the red haired owner girl?
Yes, a bit too much like BTTH, but still its own storyline. I have seen this plot too many times to become invested. The plot does move if that is your kind of thing.
Here I am... Again! I like your writing style as already said...You don't struggle, like most of us (no engish speakers), with tenses, style or grammar. This is your advantage over most of the authors on Webnovel. You use it for the perfect! Your story has everything a good novel should has (interesting storyline, expressive charcters, etc.) Definitely, you can write! Nicely!
OMG, I really didn't see it coming. Wow, the plot is truly amazing, its a really mesmerizing style of writing and the dialogues...<3Loved it, pls keep the issues on a regular basis!