the development is too fast and the writing grammer is really bad for
someone that has english for their second language and the protagonist
acts like a kid when hes supposed too be 30 years old and the reoson why the slime doesnt talk its dumb
Have your ever read a book that has this much of organization and thrill? This book is a blast every aspect is in perfect order. Language, plot , characters all are very well organized and generate curiosity every minute you are reading. Full of excitement and adventure.If you still haven't read this book , I highly recommend this book for teenagers. Do not miss this chance.
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please try this book it is goodauthor great job but it's hit me hard I am still crying I really like your storybut I feel so sad ???????????? can't stop
The novel is abit different from the rest where their MC's obtain their power with in the 1st few chapters.The story is developing very slowly and the MC only gets his fusion power at chapter 40 lol
It's a shame, the missions have punishments for failing, it doesn't matter how serious or light the punishment is at the moment there is a punishment you become a slave of the system, I don't care if it never fails or whatever, I'm out
NnnnnnnooooooiiiiiiiiiicccccceeeeeeeeeGreat book! Really enjoying the story and the characters.Keep uploadingBtw, do you have insta/discord? I'll add you.
The story seems to have a good concept, but the mc is generally pretty dumb and doesn't seem to know what common sense is. Also the grammer even on the "edited" chapters is pretty bad.
First off. Great synopsis, it's really captivating. Your name character 'James' is just wow. I wish I can create a character just like him. Your choice of words is spectacular, what can I say ? I've a lot to learn ?. You're an amazing author. Keep it up Mamacita ?
A fairly enjoyable standard transmigration novel. This feels like the skim milk of transmigration novels, the cheat isn't a system but some strange abstract tree in his head. I find the fact that he needs a variety of emotions for different effects to be a rather nice way of mixing things up from the usual "angering people to death for resentment points" systems we see so often now. Decent translation quality as well, 4/5, fairly enjoyable junk food.
bruh it's already dropped. don't waste your time or currency. again and again now everything's dropped. if privilege chps are gone so is the novel.