"Suit up gentlemen."
Everyone bow and started to walk outside the living room when.
Where did that come all of a sudden? Might as well.
A pillar of light erupted from the pedestal as it covers Chang Xiuying's wrist and it turned into a silver bracelet with emerald stones, there were wire patterns engraved on the surface of the bracelet just like the one in her Imperium Axis but much more complex.
It's a freaking duel. People actually die in duels! What's up with those moronic students?! Fight on Inna! Btw, hope you get well.
Gooood stoooory likkkke ittttt.want to read more
Good fallout fic in my opion I can’t wait to see when he starts building a nation
He didnt use his power properly. His skill was to duplicate items. And he became a swordsmen. That’s stupid, as his skill does not actively help him with that. What he should do at all times is use strong one time use items and spam them all the time and be a tank to not die while doing it. Every other way of playing just helps him passively with his ability and not actively. Like for example, through a bomb and then duplicate it shortly before throwing and bam, he through 10,000 bombs at his enemies. And the writer is a little to nationalistic
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Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter...Writing Quality, it turns out Raven is not a talking bird... It is a bit abnormal to have a female name, as a male MC... 1 Capital letter in his first chapter! no not lying its true.He has more capital letters in his review than his first chapter.................Stability of updates, sense the novel has just started, no comment. but sense each chapter is about 300-500? words and he wrote 6 total 2/3 chapters a week? that is extremely slow.... story development.. It might be there, but I cant really understand what im reading, so you get a 3Character design... I thought your MC was a talking bird, somehow you made him less interesting to me... two poor kids, which no goal or objective, its pretty empty---- I made the same mistake.World Background-- its a bit to early and his chapters are too small. id give him a 4 sense, I see signs of it being thought out.
Nice concept, but maybe you can add some interaction in the conversation, like.."Good morning sir." Someone said as they waved to your MC.
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