Writing this at the 470+ chapter markThe overall story is amazing and I see a lot of potential when it comes to world building and the overaching story.one minor problem is slow story development but currently it's bearable and at the current pace, I see this novel going over the 1000 chapter mark before it ends.
Hey readers! I’m thrilled to introduce you to From Sand to Field: A Center-Back's Dream. This novel follows the journey of a young player who starts his soccer dreams on a humble sandy field, pushing through challenges to rise in the competitive world of youth soccer. It's a story filled with hard work, determination, and the ups and downs of following a dream.I've put a lot of heart into crafting both the intense sports scenes and the slice-of-life moments that shape the characters. My goal was to create a story that's not only inspiring but also relatable for anyone who's faced challenges in their path. I’d love for you to give it a read and let me know your thoughts! Your feedback means a lot to me, so please feel free to leave a comment or rating—I’m excited to hear what you think!
I do enjoy the novel but I am not the main audience with the belief of the whole Alpha and such. The prose in describing the foreground and background were so well done I felt the cold. Very intrigued about a 1st person POV as well.
The second chapter IS great Hope you guys enjoyed it ??? go read it's great ??
looks great so far. definitely will be back for more
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
I love it especially the world's building and rye summons
just gonna read this and giving this review because my jersey number is 77 and my fav number is 7.
Arcanas is a breathtakingly beautiful novel that has left an indelible mark on my soul. The author's lyrical prose is akin to poetry, painting vivid images that transported me to a world of depth and emotion. The characters are masterfully crafted, each one a complex tapestry of hopes, fears, and dreams. I found myself invested in their journeys, cheering them on, and mourning their struggles.What struck me most was the novel's ability to balance light and darkness, hope and despair. The author's deft touch infused even the most poignant moments with a sense of warmth and redemption.
well i guess i can say good :)
This is one of the best works I’ve read my whole life, I’ve spent days searching for something like this to read and I’m enjoying it so far… this novel is peak, the mc is a perfect definition of evil with no stupid stuff like romance or love limiting him, unlike some half baked novels with their stupid villains, continue with the good work author and pls don’t go astray from the dao of evil and vile… I’ve had a creepy smile on my face all through my read, I enjoy every part of this, especially the vilest things the mc does and I hope we get more of his evil…
This obviously has incredible potential to become huge in the future, as long as the author continues being consistent, they'll surely become big one day